ReVoB: 12.02
Added 2020-05-17 17:18:50 +0000 UTCFunny how a script can hang up on a single word. I started with "dumbass"; decided it was too friendly for Tex (IIRC she never used it in the show); changed it to "stupid"; my proofreader thought it was clunky; considered "idiot," but it was too angry/mean; and then landed on "moron" this morning before drawing.
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He's sleeping through a very informative conversation, tsk tsk.
Myshu
2020-05-20 19:18:59 +0000 UTCYeah, I did a shuffle. Will see how the colors go. Haha right?? It's always dumb little stuff that hangs up. Thanks for helping me find a good work'round.
Myshu
2020-05-20 19:18:40 +0000 UTCI can't wait for Church to wake up.
Frustrated Cartoons
2020-05-17 23:08:34 +0000 UTCI'm thinkin' maybe moving the first piece of dialogue for your red-blue-spy panel might help the flow? Like if you can put "You ever hear of sleeper agents?" to the left, and shift the figures to the right? It might help draw the eye more naturally sideways after York/Wash instead of drawing it down. lmao your word-debate is SO GODDAMN RELATABLE. I do this for ten, twenty, thirty minutes sometimes when I'm trying to get a line *just right* in a story. Moron works, methinks!! Also mmmm that sweet sweet lore.
Pony
2020-05-17 20:54:37 +0000 UTC
