ReVoB: 13.25
Added 2020-09-16 14:28:24 +0000 UTCWhere's Donut and his special mop when you need 'im
At first (in the script) Wash was going to shout that last line from out of frame, but I'm glad I put him back in because it gave me a chance to
1. redeem the apple set-up
2. show off the first (and only?) instance of the foot shake, a mannerism/insult particular to chupas
So yay, visual storytelling wins again?
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Comments
Gwaha *not even I* foresaw the apple. Funny how these things turn out. Thankee, finding things for Sister to do in frame is another fun test. And lawdy, I'm glad I found a substitute for Tucker's "classic" line that still has a ring to it. "Fuck" still the most versatile word in the language. I always dig your Sarge! Never a dull moment. Haha yep, big tall cook is scary. Thanks again for watching/commenting on the whole (s)he-bang, anti-climactic as it ended. I guess that's on par for the Reds and Blues, hah.
Myshu
2020-09-19 04:22:42 +0000 UTCTHAT SPECIAL MOP. lmfao you nailed this page, Shu. I was wrong, he DID GET DAT APPLE after all. The ~~foot~~ PEET shake is nice, too, something we never otherwise see in the comic. A lovely slip-in from something that otherwise would never leave Doc's cavern (heyo?) Sis just fuckin' hand-squeezing out her mane is a beautiful detail. Your orange eggplant makes me smile, what a clever addition. FRIENDLY-FIRING FUCKER is great to say over and over, and uh. You know as always I love me some Sarge. I'm already itching to get back to him even though he won't show up in the fic for a good while again. Love that man. ...I also dig the apron-sporting, bucket-wielding chap in the bottom right -- izzat our sassy cook? However, hands down best moment gonna be Simmons. THAT POSE THO. Breakin' alien-wolf hearts already (or at least he can pretend) Nice job both wrapping up the chaos as well as dovetailing the end of it neatly and panoramically (which apparently isn't a word). Y'got such a good eye for that framing!
Pony
2020-09-16 14:37:18 +0000 UTC
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