ReVoB 16.08
Added 2021-04-12 01:28:49 +0000 UTCThis *might* be the first page since ch.6 with no speech bubbles
...time to make "rawr" a legit language
Comments
Haha thanks, it looked so basic but it works~
Myshu
2021-04-26 09:52:01 +0000 UTCI like the color matching exclamation points.
Flotster
2021-04-25 22:48:08 +0000 UTCLawdy, I never responded here? Shame on me. Action/punchy-punches are a tricky spot for me, so thxxxxxx for saying the impacts look effective. Ahaha my weird-dumb SFX keep on truckin'. That's my favorite visual tell for warwoofs, those frizzy hackles. Church goin' full bottlebrush on the tail is just plain fun, too. Hell yeah, bottom panels fav, all WWE poster up ins. Was looking way forward to drawing those shots, yep. Lawd the differences in PHYSIQUE, as you say, really stand out there. (phhht pine cone murder later, as we saw)
Myshu
2021-04-21 14:09:38 +0000 UTClawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwdt. *lawwwwwwwwwwdddddddddt* ALSO HNNNNGH, I'm already dying. Alright, let me focus on things, because there is a LOT to love despite the *hngh*. Your first two panels are fawkin' *great*, the feel of motion is goddamn on-point. That punch is somehow both comic-style AND impactful, good job with that shit. (Dig that foreshortenin' on Church's leg, espesh) *haw* "GRRT" is a fantastic choice for Church as his ass slidin' away, j'adore your decision there. And panel 4, lawwwwwd, yeah, okay -- that frazzled fur is good. I really like how it just instantly gives the air of "pissed off" which, y'know. It's not like that emotion isn't *obvious*, but to highlight it so succinctly is v. good to give the page that much more life. Double-sizin' the last two is just a beautiful choice, complete with mirrored shots 'n low angles. Drama up the wazoo in all the best ways. Your *finger game* is in its prime here, SO MANY GODDAMN GOOD FINGERS AND THUMBS, yeah. Yeah. Yeah. Ugh. And yeah, both Church 'n York are depicted perfectly here -- tubby Church with all his fluff 'n his scarf, York with his gun 'n key. It's just perfect. Puppy lookin' mighty fit, though, no joke. It seems *pretty clear* how this fight is gonna go, but lordt, there is no sense of relief 'bout that. I DID notice there's no pine cone anywhere on this page which...lesbianest, probably for the best. Our hearts wouldn't be able to take it. I wanna bask in the amazing poses 'n forms 'n attention to detail despite the quicker style but instead, alas. Only fretting to be had. (hnnnnngh) (But I mean, kick his ass, Pup)
Pony
2021-04-12 02:14:39 +0000 UTC
