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ReVoB 18.12

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OC: Trevor (CrossroadsPony)

ReVoB 18.12

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Oh heck yeah, panel 7 is the money shot. So happy you jived with Wash's... THAT expression, what can you call it - a bit more than words, *yeah.* Mmmm new hairstyle.try - It's fun how Trevor's flavor of *messy* is distinct from Wash's frazzlefro and York's *stylishly unkempt* look. Wanted to try an after-dark sort of atmosphere. Glad that worked, too! [spits out ASSHOLEOLOGY] HEH apparently a doctorate in archeology makes a very ambiguous "D.A." Okay, now I'm just relieved that it didn't seem weird for York to "sneak up" on these two. You're right; they were too wrapped up in the footage to notice even that big handsome bastard comin' around the corner.

Myshu

Oh lawwwwwd you got that intense shit comin' down the pipe. Fuck YEAH these expressions kill. I really like Wash's progression through each frame, with 7 just fuckin' *knockin' it* out the park. Tented fingers in front of muzzle, yes plz, more conveyed there than ever could be with words. Ahaha and YEAAAAH our boi Trevor lookin' fine -- the new body type looks perfect, I see that loose shirt, his messy mane *screams* IT...yep. Good call on that, especially doubled up with his awkward/hesitant faces. (And yeah okay I agree, "What the fuck, sir" is p. much top-tier right there :hee: Oh man, the hard-glaze style for the security vidja is good shit. Really dig the dramatic lighting and honestly, the lack of details works well, gives it the recorded-footage look that much more. Great job with that li'l unobtrusive omega up 'ere in the corner, and the convo between the Director 'n the Counselor carries just the right amount of mysterious undertone. Makes ya wonder if the bad guys were who we thought they were. And then last li'l bit I love is the way we get York entering -- love seein' over his shoulder for the first shot (and DARE I ASK what those titles are after L. Church's name? Doctorate in ASSHOLEOLOGY I would presume :bert:) But how York's comin' into this scene out the side 'n how the other two don't see him 'til he announces himself, it's a great way of showin' how intense the footage is. ...And yeah, I'll say it. Fuckin' Big Pup lookin' GOOD, okay. OKAY. Glad we're all on the same page. Damn he's a fine beast. (You know I'm fuckin' *hog-wild* for them scars 'n shit :allears:)

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