ReVoB 19.07
Added 2021-11-30 18:04:46 +0000 UTCthat's like a quadruple negative of fucks
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[spits out various kinds of p] Ahahah as we've agreed, a very appropriate character for this speech to land with. And yeah, it's good when the energy of a scene trickles down the page. Fits nicely and avoids whiplash. lmao curse thee for the arm grip pose, it's stuck. Ahaha true, Trevor gotta come to grips with who's holding the leash, there.
Myshu
2021-12-03 19:04:52 +0000 UTC[spits out quadruple negative] Simmons can't decide whether he's wet with the pp or the PP. GOD you keep the energy flowing HARD into this page, and I love every frame of it. You can hear the strain as Wash leanin' on the table, just going for the pleading angle, and then right afterward, we have Nelson just *raw* with her fury and frustration. It's kinda beautiful in its holy-shit'd-ness. Ahahaha THE BLACK HOLE SPEECH at long last. :allears: Love it so much. Came out beautifully, that wide-angle, everyone's face -- *SARGE* lookin' mollified like he thought HE was the scariest red-army NCO, *no sir* you ain't met MSGT Nelson. (And yeah, lmaoooo, THANKS for Andee popping in, literally, love that angle 'n pose; good thing we can't see Samael because he'd throw off the mood even more with his delight) (his "...I think" face might be my favorite tho) I really enjoy how you can feel the anger and frustrating tapering into the uncomfortable aftermath when the yelling is done. Nelson's finger on the table, the lack of ! in her speech on frame 5 do a LOT of storytelling on their own. She's past the wrath, now she's down to simple facts. (*aaaa* dying again for cone-looking-away-while-gripping-arm AAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaa god that frame is so good, almost a more powerful showdown between these two than all the yelling and THAT is impressive you capture that) Phew. We tired by the end of the page, but it's strong, solid shit. I love every word. I also love Trevor apparently low-key forgetting he belongs to Nelson (sorry, nerd, that's what you get for being recruited on the Pony Express -- ya belong to *her* now) Oh man, oh man. This whole streak of pages has just been a delight, loved every one of 'em. Charge on, lady, charge on. Can't wait :love_hotel:
Pony
2021-11-30 19:17:43 +0000 UTC
