ReVoB 19.09
Added 2021-12-08 00:53:58 +0000 UTCthey make a mean gumbo in hell, I hear
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lmao I'll spare ye the :newspaper2: Yeaaaah it's wild to juggle so many characters - I guess I KNOW YOUR PAIN, lawd. Gwaha, I remember your rock-themed rants. It is somethin' you gotta feel out, and remember SHAPES then DEETS. [spits out lanky jungle gym] No lie, I do have an appreciation for Simmons's physique. It's not a waif-y thing; he a tall and lanky lad. And right! I always put extra blocky nostrils on him, too. Cool of a whorseband to notice. I love the idea that Sarge just - stole another set of Red-issue armor, somewhere on this ride. Ahaha Donut's gesticulating could amuse me for days Haha, that Cone stands out like a road flare with that shock'a yellow hair, bless his not-very-incognito little head. And mmm, composition~ Gracias, m'whorse. Let's keep learning together, yo
Myshu
2021-12-09 16:07:25 +0000 UTCwhoa-ho FUCK ME I forgot to reply last night, bad pup. To the corner with me. :allears: Oh mang, it's nice/weird to shift back to...you know. Half of the *main characters* for the first *several chapters* hahaha. I almost feel bad sometimes 'cause *lawd* wasn't my own writing the same way. Started out with all this focus on the reds 'n blues with the OCs, but then shifted to the Rebel Only Party:tm: Good times to be back here. GOD that background, your first wide shot is just *hnnnnnngh* a dream. Love your work on that goddamn mine scene, your rocks/walls are SO good. I need to crib from it more because rocks/cave-walls are such a hole for me and I hate it. Yours have such a natural feel to 'em, no matter how speed is in yer paint. Haha Donut's no shorty but I FORGET Simmons is a big tall nerd. :allears: I ain't forgot about that back-burner prompt for Hiko's 'adventures', I'mma have me a goddamn blast with that lanky jungle gym, hell yeah. Love seein' you get to draw new-but-old characters again. Haha Sarge the only one still in his armor, help. Still too appropriate. Aaaaah Sarge. Mmmm. Love your Sarge lines, always a treat, always the right kinda spice to a scene. And we have tinkering!Sarge here, too. I know we talked 'bout how much we both love mechanically-inclined Sarge. *lmaoooo* the faces on Donut 'n Simmons in panel 4, halp. Those are fantastic. I also really like seeing the anatomical differences now that I have so much more of a focus on how you do heads 'n such -- Simmons has those more pronounced nostril-ridges the rest of 'em don't. A nice distinguisher. Your hands are on point as always! Sarge grippin' that screwdriver is great (and love how easy it is to picture the gesture in 4), but Simmons in 5 and *of course* Donut's Extra:tm: gesturing in 6 both a delight. Great job wit' dem lines. (sup Grif -- haw, let me appreciate them stumpy legs since I suck at drawin' 'em, but gotta keep gettin' better to do that body type justice, dammit) Looooove that last panel, too. Look at you using *composition* to draw our attention to the approaching cone (and lead us naturally to the next page). Ain't you magical!! Y'know I'm lookin' forward to these comin' pages :allears: Keep rockin'.
Pony
2021-12-08 15:54:26 +0000 UTC
