Comments
"beautiful perfect li'l shit" should be on Andee's business card Heh yeah, you see how a last-minute change can shift the whole focus of a panel. Comics are nuts. LOVE your addition of the crackling energy and the sundry sword effects you've tested on this sequence, it's hott.
Myshu
2022-12-02 20:23:12 +0000 UTCOh man I had more fun with this page than I'd realized. Even if a lot of the shading/highlighting got tweaked/softened, it felt good and I felt confident about a lot of it. I'm hopin' to combine that with what you showed me to be able to do the next one both quicker AND still goodly. We'll see! Haha, yeah, still marveling over Andee being such a beautiful perfect li'l shit in the first two panels. I love his face against the words comin' out his mouth. He really is so energized by this chaos since it ain't affecting *him* none. I love that about 'im. Tucker's faces are great, too, you do a great job with hisexpressions right up to the WOLF PUNCH which is neither fruity *nor* delicious, ow. Seriously, though, the power and surprise are captured in that frame so well, you did a great job showing the punch in that...well. Punch. And hell do I love your edit to the last panel. Looks way better with Church spotting Caboose, which also serves to explain him attempting to screech to a halt/back-pedal. Perfect flow of behaviors depicted here. Great job with that, m'Cone. More, more, more plz.
Pony
2022-11-12 05:28:20 +0000 UTC
