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Writing Diary #19 & Sneak Peek

Added 2025-06-03 17:39:28 +0000 UTC

Ya'll letting Imre win haha he is the people's prince for real

So I've been writing the next scene. It is a bit longer than I expected and I'm still not done so perhaps I should cut this scene into two instead. Debating...

It's cause this scene has a lot of introspection instead of action. A lot of dialogue too between Crowny and the ROs, solo sessions.

Here's a sneak peek regarding Crowny's feelings about Lorcan. It changes based on morality for you guys to be able to see the difference:

MORAL!Crowny

It makes you smile a bit. It’s always gnawed at you. Logically it’s easy to think that a child has no bearing on what a grown adult does but… you can’t but think about what you said all those years ago and feel a thumb-sized pressure of guilt on your throat. His life as he knew it was destroyed because of something you said.

<<if $Lorcanrelationship lock>>[You wish you could help him.]

“Forgiveness is rare,” you respond wistfully.

IMMORAL!Crowny

You stop yourself from rolling your eyes. Boo hoo. Terrible shit happens everywhere, Lorcan’s dad isn’t the first nor the last psycho who kills his slutty wife. She dug her own grave and so did he. It wasn’t your fault and fuck Lorcan for thinking so. If he wasn’t such a whiny pussy he would get over it already.

<<if $Lorcanrelationship lock>>[Although, he does look cute when he whines.]

“Forgiveness is rare,” you respond in a mockingly sympathetic voice.