What Have I Done? 3 #42
Added 2018-10-27 15:01:00 +0000 UTC
„What Have I Done?“….
Life can play a difficult game with winning conditions and loss conditions… situations that happen in every family, every relationship, everyone‘s life~ situations that create a person and form it over the time. Still, when something gets destroyed, something new gets the chance to enter the game…
This is the story about Chess and her family. What makes them special? What makes them weak, what makes them strong? What happened, what will happen? Find it out for yourself.
Find the first page of Part 1 here: fav.me/d8mz5tp
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It's time to let this old story live on, again. Yes, "What Have I Done?" is back and better than ever- expect more information, more pages and more feelings~ I hope you enjoy the last part of it.
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lol, well i vaguely remember that death scene, i hardly remember the movie besides the main plot xdd and whatever works for you i guess xD
TwoTailedD3rpy
2018-10-28 12:57:27 +0000 UTCThat's true. Thank you for letting me know I made that old mistake, again XD Meh And yes, it was inspired my Nuka's death from the Lion king 2. Ever watched the movie? I wanted to make this story appropriate for almost everyone so no real violence/gore here. I thought in such situations, every word spoken was too much... since things can't be changed anymore and finding explainations in such a situation... I'm not sure. I just saw the last few scenes without dialogue in my head
LupiArts
2018-10-28 06:57:56 +0000 UTCpfft I had to be sure you got that right on the paper xp also which Disney death specifically? Maybe you got inspired by Disney for that scene but the story doesnt really have a "Disney feel" to it i suppose. It's like saying in an anime a person trips over a rock and the just die with no real explanation, now that i know WHY he died now i can kinda empathize with Ron's family more here i think xp i guess the story also has that effect on me where i got confused because Ron actually died but no dialogue was given so i was confused why xp
TwoTailedD3rpy
2018-10-27 19:23:18 +0000 UTCOh god damnit XD That stupid error, I already got that lesson and STILL I do that wrong... ugh... thank you for letting me know, Taily. Well, on one hand I didn't want to show broken bones or blood etc which definitely would have been a result of this incident. Mainly, the reason he died is because of inner bleeding and he choked after his lungs were crushed/squashed. Imagine it to be some kind of Disney death which it is actually based on. Confusion is not quite the effect I'm going for but rather curiosity XD Hope you don't think it's too unlogical XD Perhaps the next few pages will make things better? Let's hope so. Thanks for your support taily^^
LupiArts
2018-10-27 19:00:35 +0000 UTC"ensurance" -> "insurance" also wow that fall thing actually killed him? There werent any signs of broken bones or maybe internal bleeding right? what even happened to him??? ggs Lupi this story still has my full attention but i'm a bit confused with the turn it's taking xp
TwoTailedD3rpy
2018-10-27 17:28:24 +0000 UTC
