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Added 2025-05-26 16:49:23 +0000 UTCNew scene! Hey, remember these plotlines? They're still there!
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...I'm sorry if this i blunt but really? I was kind of hoping that were FINALLY going to get back to Belfry and have her talk to Tamberlane about the incident on the filed trip. Her and Briar were literally on the way there and we've been building to that plot thread for awhile... only for us to go back to Cur again? This is getting old; since when is Cur this hugely important character he is secondary at best to the entire main plot. Also we barely know any of these people beyond Parsley and Marie! I know we saw them in this chapter but... the investment is just not there, honestly. I'm sorry but this is a let down(I rejoined the patreon just because i thought it was going to get back to Belfry today, so no I am not just mindlessly here to hate)
NomadicFox
2025-05-28 15:44:22 +0000 UTCBel is not the only one to have doubts in there abilities I see.
Xarmech
2025-05-27 18:52:14 +0000 UTC
