On the third page she gets a long Bob. I felt like drawing some forced/ shocking scenes. So I made this page first, On the next page she gets a Mohawk and shaved off smooth. And first two pages, Iโll change the paneling system, itโs got boring, seeing 4 rectangular panels per page. Iโll try a more complex approach, zoom out, zoom in some of the panels, add some background if I can, Iโll level up.