Masaki The Devourer II - Page 47
Added 2023-03-28 13:46:27 +0000 UTCSo...little disclaimer here. I've had this page written for a while, and I intended to have the vore joke be just that obviously. I slight mislead in Rinari's wording, and then relief when the reader sees Norah is ok. However, after the reaction to last weeks page, I didn't know I had people expecting and looking forward to a vore moment. BUT...all that being said I hope everyone enjoys the friendship building moment here just as well.
As usual, please let me know if the page doesn't read well or is confusing.
Comments
That would be great I would definitely like to see that if you do
Volcom25
2023-03-28 17:00:44 +0000 UTCI really really love Rinari and she has some good stuff coming up. Belly wise and personality wise. And Rukia is a bad bad girl. And she will eat ANYTHING. If anyone is gonna vore, she will
GagaLadyLover
2023-03-28 16:22:55 +0000 UTCGreat! I was wondering if I could manage subvert expectations there a little. But good news, since I know there is a want for vore stuff, I could do some side pieces dealing with it.
GagaLadyLover
2023-03-28 16:20:40 +0000 UTCWell played you fooled me I was totally expecting a vore moment after Rinari tried to eat both Rin and Norah. This page is still great though I like that Norah and Rinari are bonding despite their differences and the character development you have for both of them is great. Can’t wait to see how this contest goes between them especially now that Norah seems to be ok with stuffing herself now.
Volcom25
2023-03-28 15:07:54 +0000 UTCWow nice fake out I literally did not see this coming. I do like more introspection into Rinari’s character. Though I might be biased because she is my favorite character overall. I am not too upset with the vore being a tease. To be honest I only expect it to happen should the cast be dealing with very bad individuals or the final showdown with Rukia.
UltraSpinkie
2023-03-28 14:15:57 +0000 UTC
