The sketch of 33% of the chapter of my webcomic is ready.
Added 2023-07-29 12:29:29 +0000 UTCIf you notice strange phrases that you think I should have written differently, let me know, since I am not a native speaker. I also wanted to warn you that I haven't added many onomatopoeic yet, only those that I considered important for understanding some points. If you have any suggestions for changing any scenario moments or character design, you can tell me about it, but remember that this is only the third part of the entire chapter.
