Jorcy & Co's Failed Quests #2 - AMY
Added 2019-06-27 11:40:47 +0000 UTC
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Scenes such as the ones portrayed herein should always be safe, sane and consensual. And fun for everyone involved! :)
Finally!
This one took a bit longer than I'd anticipated - but I hope you'll agree that it paid off in the end!
Thanks to Aboneart, who helped me out with the dialogue - though I probably took too few of their suggestions to heart and all the bad bits are 100% me :)
Two heroines down, so the next one will be Tia's quest... I wonder if she'll do better!
(lots of sketches and stuff in the BTS for this one - showing just how much I messed around, trying to figure this pic out ;) )
EDIT: I forgot to mention that Alysa Prison, that this witch previously worked with, comes from Skelebomb's work!
Edit 2: Had the wrong link for the dropbox here for a sec. Thanks to the kind patron who pointed it out - it should be fixed now! :)
Comments
Thanks!!! Yeah I quite like having the badder girls tied up, too! :) ::)
Elijah Pink
2019-07-07 12:16:55 +0000 UTCWawwawaw! (灬♥ω♥灬) This is just Amazing! Your work with Jorcy was incredibly gorgeous, even more with the full OTM version. Jorcy seems to be a nice girl and the fact that she's been tricked makes her quest/story more... enjoyable♥. But I think that Amy is my favorite. I really like her design and also maybe because she's a bit a bad girl (¬‿¬). Villainesses in heavy/tight bondage mouth stuffed gags, just like in Amy's quest/story (♥ω♥) ~♪ is one of the things that I enjoy the most. My kinky snake's heart wish to say that you and your works are amazing and I wish you all the best (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
2019-07-06 02:19:29 +0000 UTCHaha yeah the mean ones are often the best when they get it :D Thanks!
Elijah Pink
2019-07-03 14:40:11 +0000 UTCYes, a thousand times yes. I love it when Amy gets the treatment, I kinda feel bad for Jo cos her heart usually seems to be in the right place, but I know Amy has a mean streak so I can enjoy it :) Also, I am loving the outfit for this witch lady, pointy hat, stockings and those big round lenses *chef kiss*
2019-06-30 23:14:26 +0000 UTCThis turned out incredible!!!! Love seeing Amy with such a huge gag. The story/dialogue might be your best yet, really love this anxious villain
vasily26
2019-06-30 21:58:27 +0000 UTCYeah thats why I often like "improvised" bonds and stuff too - to give that feel that they've been super duper tied up out of necessity more than a thought, planned thing. Cheers! :)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-28 21:54:44 +0000 UTCCheers!
Elijah Pink
2019-06-28 21:51:45 +0000 UTCCheers, glad you like them! And my VR game, with full sensory suit for total realism will be out in 2030 ;)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-28 21:51:34 +0000 UTCShe might not be too happy about it now, but give her a few days and she might warm up to it! :)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-28 21:46:44 +0000 UTCI think one of the things I really like about this is that Amy's bondage (and this is something I've always liked but never really put into words) is more practical and utilitarian then just over the top for the sake of being excessive and/or sexual/fetish-y (like I usually ask for in sketches :P ) if that makes sense. While it is super tight and the gag is thick, I like how the first impression I get is that the bondage is treated as a means to an end, to keep Amy in the shop and isolated from the outside world so she can test the box, instead of just being the end. You did a really good job of setting up Amy's captor and her reasons for why she tied up her up like that. There's a real weight to it which is what I like so much about this. So well done on this, I'll having to remember using bondage like this in the future ;)
tfjohnson
2019-06-28 18:12:53 +0000 UTCLooks like Amy has got a second job. Lucky her!
Diesel from Detroit
2019-06-28 18:12:12 +0000 UTCI absolutely adore these! They’re fun, action (and mouth) packed, and hit so many aspects of my bondage fetish! Sometimes I wish I was an Elijah Pink ’toon!
kenjibound
2019-06-28 02:29:34 +0000 UTCThis is a hilariously cute and fun idea. Love how you went about this page. XD
Aidenke
2019-06-28 01:06:47 +0000 UTCGlad to hear your interest and I can't wait to see what you come up with Jorcy and co in the prison. Plus Alysa and the warden. XD As you know, there's nothing I enjoy more than seeing a very bad girls served an extra large piece of humble pie as their just desserts.
esclavage
2019-06-27 23:54:19 +0000 UTCAhaha I never even thought about it being an ahegao face :D I do find passing out faces fun to draw though :D And good catch on the neck - I really wanted her to look like she was straining like crazy! And I do have a story Ive started... well its only two sketched pics as of yet... of Jorcy & Co getting pulled deeper and deeper into a prison. Not Alysa though, since I'm pretty sure I drew the warden of that one in one of the cages... :D But yeah a dungeon (and not as in fantasy dungeon, but as in locked up dungeon) tour, with different cells and stuff could be a fun one!
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:18:47 +0000 UTCCheers! And thanks so much for the help too!
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:15:19 +0000 UTCHaha nice! I wonder... if the claustrophobia of being in a small closet would be kind of negated by being in a tiny box? :D Thanks for the comment on the background! I love doing little details and stuff, but it takes time from doing the things that "matter", I guess. But it helps establish mood and even characters. So its fun to do! And ask my anthing at any time!! :)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:15:08 +0000 UTCThanks! I think ideally I'd have liked to have more panels to do the "villains" speech for example. It gets very tell-not-show like this. My instinct is always to draw stuff out for super long, but I quite like forcing myself to do some sort of compressed storytelling - even though I don't really consider myself to be too good at it :)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:11:15 +0000 UTCCan't have her disturbing the neighbors :D Cue practically smothered and half face turned into a barrel of tape ;)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:09:23 +0000 UTCHaha didn't think of that, but now that you mention it...! :D And thanks so much for that correction! It had been bugging me like crazy - you can see in the time lapse vid that I change that line and Amy's response like 20 times. And in the end I still totally missed a word! Jeeez! But "wrote" is great! Changed! Cheers! :)
Elijah Pink
2019-06-27 22:08:28 +0000 UTCAmazing work as always, elijah. Details that I love - the darker skin hue around Amy's neck and her big toes showing the trapped blood and emphasizing how she's struggling in the big panel 5. Amy's 'ahegao' expression in panel 4 when she's being brain-blasted by our resident mage. Once the Failed Quests is completed, I want a tour of Alysa Prison to see their rogue's gallery of captured and incarnated villainesses. I think it'd be a lot of fun for you to come up with OC character designs and for us to propose imprisonment ideas. XD
esclavage
2019-06-27 21:26:33 +0000 UTCHoly crap, this is basically just Kat in Jorcy World. Yessssssssss, excellent. :3c Note: In the second panel, the dialog is kinda weird. "But I haven't gotten any responses at all when written the truth." The last half seems like it needs a word or two rearranged: "when the truth was written." or "when I wrote the truth." are both more natural sounding.
SuichiTanaka
2019-06-27 16:10:04 +0000 UTCJust awesome work in every way, especially with the amount of detail!
Abo
2019-06-27 14:27:14 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this!! That gag is obviously so hot, but the bound-and-stashed-away-in-a-chest thing has always been a fantasy of mine too. The straps, the padding, all the locks and that dark little closet are so devious and really nail the claustrophilia for me. I'm jealous of her 👀 Also: All the backgrounds you've done for these have been gorgeous. You always pay such wonderful attention to detail. One of these days I've gotta get you to give me some pointers!
jam-orbital
2019-06-27 12:25:26 +0000 UTCI always admire your story telling! You can do in a couple of panels what it takes me ten or more to do.
Constrictor
2019-06-27 12:11:03 +0000 UTCI think that's one of your best gags yet!
tfjohnson
2019-06-27 11:58:19 +0000 UTC