KAMALA & MILES - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

One of the best comics you've done. Miles and Kamela where so cute. I honestly wish it was longer. And yes, the art was also great. I loved description of porn fics from Kamela. You know a comic with a weird situation that ends with a twist that the story was one of Kamela's porn fics would be great for a future comic.

Dennis King

I finally got to read this! It was borderline perfect lemon fic. The fact it was a Lemon in a Lemon was the inception of parodies. The innocents of Kamala was the most turn on for the fic. That she never gave up the principles was something that most comics would take and that sets this one apart from any other. I would love a series of Kamala dealing with after math of the great rubdown and start going wild on Fan Fics. Ms. Marvel and Captain Marvel is needed for the future, Maybe go to an alternate Earth where Carol is a man and loses her virginity to her there :0

I think that USB drive future could fall into the hands of the Nova generating much more than we could expect from it if he showed up. :P

Diego Bachini Lima

Easily the most stimulating comic I've read in quite some time! I would pledge double to get a Part II to this comic ASAP. The writing felt so true and immersive, and quite honestly fulfills one of my inner-fantasies from when I was younger, the kind of interaction I dreamed of having. Keep up the amazing work, TS!

Baba O'Reilly

Easily the most stimulating comic I've read in quite some time! I would pledge double to get a Part II to this comic ASAP. The writing felt so true and immersive, and quite honestly fulfills one of my inner-fantasies from when I was younger, the kind of interaction I dreamed of having.

Baba O'Reilly

But I think you missed an opportunity with Kamala/Miles. You could have made the first part one of Kamala's smutty fanfics, a full-blown (pun intended) story of her, Miles and others (like Nova, Carol, Cap, Medusa, Loki, etc.). Then have the real Miles, plus maybe Nova, show up at the end. That'd be a real sex-hanger (sex cliffhanger) and have everybody eagerly anticipate more. Vision shows up at the end?? WTF? Where is that going? Nowhere anybody wants.

Ars Gratia Artis

2 strong stories this month.

Ars Gratia Artis

I'm not sure I understand what you meant. What is Blech? And what exactly isn't your cup of tea? Fanfictions? Outercourse? Muslim girls? Black guys? I think I need a bit more information to understand your feedback. ;)

Tracy Scops

Sorry to say but I'm going to have to go with blech for an opinion on this one. Not my cup of tea but that's fine, obviously others like it.

David N

Lol (x2). Yaoi art isn't quite appealing to the majority of my readers, but that doesn't mean I can't play with it a little in the dialogues. =)

Tracy Scops

Lol. I was half-expecting a yaoi joke (it's about a teenage girl's fanfics, after all) and that offhand reference to there being a Miles/Caps story did not disappoint.

Grey G.

I talked about some of the things you wrote in the other answers, so you can read them there. About the costume, The change from Burkini to a Short Dress wasn't my original plan, but it became necessary to take the story along the grinding theme I worked with. So I took some liberties there, indeed. About the panties, I respectfully disagree. Girls only wear matching panties if they plan on showing it to somebody else. As I see it, panties aren't part of her costume, just like cops don't wear matching briefs. In the case of this particular story, she wasn't expecting anybody to see it, so it doesn't make any sense she'd be wearing red panties (which is definitely NOT an everyday panty-color for a respectful muslim girl). About new suggestions for upcoming stories, I will open a new contest in a few days, since we reached a new milestone. You can make your suggestion there.

Tracy Scops

My answer to your first question is: OF COURSE IT'S SMUT!!! ;) As I said in the other answer above, the actual play between Kamala and Miles is indeed somewhere between limes and lemons, depending on the reader's feelings about outercourse. But the facial splurt in the end does tilts things to a more citric side of the spectrum, don't you think? But there's another facet that reflects a bit of my own experiences as a teenager. It's usually common knowledge that teenage boys are a mess of hormones but it's quite rare to hear about the teenage girls sexdrives. Girls are just as horny and hormone-driven as boys, but they are way more confused about it, because there's much more pressure put on them by society as whole, that they're just not allowed to fuck. Of course I didn't dive to much on that, but that whole situation resonates a lot for me, especially since Kamala is such a grounded character which, just like you said, works quite like Peter did for guys decades ago. So, the fact that Kamala wants-but-not-wants is so real to me that it almost hurts. But it hurts so good, like first-times are supposed to. =)

Tracy Scops

My idea was to have 2 themes guiding this narrative: Kamala's fanfic passion and the outercourse grinding fetish. I personally think non-penetrative sex is as exciting as the insertive coitus, so I don't personally agree with the sex being lacking in this story. But since I know that others might not share my passion for the rubbing and prodding, I made sure that the "imaginative" parts of the comic showed a lot of inner shoving. I feel it came out quite balanced, considering the number of pages I can work with. =)

Tracy Scops

Kamala & Miles was my favorite of this month's new comic offerings. Bayushi's art is fantastic, and I wish he (she?) could draw all the comics. The characterizations felt spot-on, too, from the fanfic offerings, to Kamala over explaining things, to Miles being eager but nervous at the same time. Obviously the sex in this one was somewhat lacking, in terms of actual penetration, but, for me at least, that didn't dampen my enjoyment of the comic. The first panel, with Miles and Gwen, is incredibly hot (and it looks like this might even become a thing in the real comics soon), as was the panel where Kamala is getting DP'ed by Miles and Nova (I was hoping most of the story would be like that, but it was still good). I also loved the panel where Miles grabs Kamala's ass as they swing away. Is he an ass man, perhaps? The rest of the comic, with all of the rubbing and grinding and close "almost" slip ups, was very hot, too, especially with all of the great close-ups of Kamala's well-illustrated pussy and asshole. The ending was perfect, too, although I imagine Vision would just use a communicator instead of showing up in person. But, it would have been a very different ending if Cap, or Thor, or Iron Man had shown up instead. And very, very different if it had been Nova. I'd definitely like to see more stories about these characters. Maybe the new "Champions" comic will give you some ideas. Miles and Viv, maybe? Kamala and Miles and the Totally Awesome Hulk? That'd sure test out her stretching powers ;)

Kyle R

You have absolutely no idea how long I’ve waited for this. Out of all the characters that I’ve ever like Kamala earned my top spot as one of my most favorite female character, and the art really delivered because god damn she was sexy in all of them. Bayushi really did a fantastic job here. Reading this I actually thought the story would show some full on sex scene in the form of her fanfictions, but here you had Kamala and Miles starting off in a lemon territory, which is honestly a much welcoming thing here What I also like here is that you made it subtle because that is something Kamala would do and would rather take things slow, and so I’m glad you got her characteristics right. Honestly, this is quite refreshing and I wouldn’t mind you do things slow here, but a part of me hoped that along the line it would progress. Maybe later on, but in any case this is perhaps one of your more better stories you’ve done, because we’ve been reading a lot of your previous works involving pretty much all of the Spider-Man characters immediately jumping into sex that you don’t get why they would easily jump into that, but here Kamala took is slow, even though she would like to try and go full on, and I appreciate her for doing that. And her being a kind of tease would make things more fun. Involving Miles is something I think the main comics have already hint a possibility of it happening in both of their series, and so it won’t be a surprise that it happened here. Another thing I will compliment here is Kamala’s costume. I really like the slight change being done here since the theme here is lewd, and I think anyone who wants to make a Kamala story should make it her main costume, but the only thing I will complain about it is her panties because it’s pink and not red. Had she been in her civilian identity then it would be okay that she wore pink, but as Ms. Marvel it should have been red because when you wore a costume like that the panties should be made as part of her costume, and that means the panties have to match the colors you’re wearing, and that means it should have been red instead of pink. This is me being a critic when it comes to superhero costumes because anything you wore has to match and be a part of your costume. Another thing I will point out is that her boots are red and not blue. The boots in the main Kamala comic is blue, but here is red and that’s an error Regardless, personally you should really consider doing more Kamala stories alongside your Spider-Man stories in the future because that way you have one type of territory for Spider-Man and another territory for Kamala. Besides the villains. Spider-Man has the clones, the girlfriends, the symbiotes, the dimension jumping, and others for his territory. I actually wanted to see some sci-fi elements on Kamala’s territory along with some of her fanfictions stories, and maybe with some of the Inhumans. I even have some ideas for that. I think this is something that most people actually did talked to you about over a year ago in your page. I can’t remember Back to the matter at hand, I’m actually very happy with how this story turns out because you’ve perfectly balance the smuttiness of things with great dialogues, and it is a really good and welcoming change from your other stories. It’s that good and I applaud you for that. I thank you for bringing Kamala into this because I’m very attached to this character as she holds a special place for me, and for you to actually do your own take on her has been a joy for me. I really hope you do a sequel for this as I want to see more, and maybe a solo story for her to do one day Anyway, fantastic stuff and again I thank you for bringing Kamala into this. Can’t wait for more. If you made this ongoing then I’ll gladly pay for it alongside Spidercest. Thank you for this and have a great day Shots of Kamala in page 7 and page 9 were just glorious. Are there any full shots of them?

SH2307

This may be one of the most meta comics TS has ever done, and that includes the stuff with Deadpool and Gwenpool. BUT IS IT SMUT?! In the framing context of Kamala and her creative interests, a deconstruction of all levels of fanfic does make sense. It certainly taught me more than I knew about fanfic (although I was vaguely familiar with the definitions of a lemon). But the meta comes in where to a certain extent, this is very much TS explaining their own methodology a bit, especially when you start comparing this comic with its sister comic, Civil War. Because you see, CW is a lemon to its bones. But Kamala and Miles, shockingly, is more in Limon territory (see what I did there?) And I have super mixed feelings about that. Ever since TS put out their initial lineart of Kamala getting some Spider dick, I was prepared for the full monty. Even the revelation of that first page prepared me for the idea that okay, maybe the two of them weren't actually going to do it except in the fantasy of her fanfic. With some Carol and Jane mixed in. But what we got was... not nearly as much. When they did get down to the smut, Kamala was so careful to retain her virginity, giving us the trappings of utter perversion, but never giving us a complete payoff. ...is it weird that part of me is okay with that? This is where the mixed feelings come in. Look, I don't know how TS feels about Kamala. But for me, she holds a special place in my heart. I get that she is to a bunch of new young women (and young men) what Peter Parker was to me as a young geekling. Now I'm a hairs breath from 40, and even though I am not the young geek I was, she still invokes a lot of those old feelings in me. This is why when she decides to take it slow (even though part of her clearly wants it all), I'm actually on board with that. Okay, I get that the Tracyverse Kamala is not the same as the 'real world' Kamala . And yet, I still laud her choice to take her sexuality as slow or as fast as she wants. We've got tons of utter sluts in Tracy world, and the choice to make Kamala not one of them is weirdly relieving. Does it make me want to see a sequel? Hell yes. And to be honest, as I mentioned a moment ago, Civil War is almost wall to wall sex, infinite diversity in infinite combination. In a way, K+M needs to provide a counterpoint to that. So yeah, at the end of the day, I'm happy to have K+M take a more nuanced approach, even if it was a bit of a tease. It's a good story, with good dialogue, and well, Bayushi's art, man. As I'll get into when I review Civil War, the right artists were picked for the right jobs. Bayushi is one of the best in the biz for bringing out the adorbs in his art and faces. And in this kind of story, it was this touch that was definitely needed. So I am 100% behind it. Love it, love B-face, love TS. Long Live Lemon, and Make Mine Marvel!

GregD