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FLERKEN OUTBREAK - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

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FLERKEN OUTBREAK - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

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Flerken Outbreak was sadly a mixed bag. On the plus side the art is a class in of itself. A mix of oil painting in coloring, and the long and powerful late 80's technocratic satire manga merging into a powerful whole. Jess is flawless in her movements even with the Minara reference, Star Wars Day is Chewie's favorite day for sure when Auntie Jess shows up. The rendering of each tentacle is unbelievable in detail and design. It's quite clear however that the narrative lacks juice. Like why is Jenny here, other than the Japanese origins of the fetish there just isn't much connection to Jess or Carol. The women here aren't kinky fetishists who are 100% into tentacles, and because of the pheromones they aren't hesitant either. It just sorta plays out without a pulse. Jess is one of many who hasn't had an at bat in a situation of peril, and this one seems like it could have worked very well if it was her first.

Spooney Bard

The Artwork was so CLEAN ON THIS ONE! My goodness, something about the clarity of Hazmats face and costume design the way it glow was very unexpected and very welcomed, and the bike riding in the start looked absolutely phenomenal too

Jak O'Hara

Hmmm. Actually you're right, my apologies. The art was great, I loved the colors, and the writing was also very good

Lazarus0024

Never what it is, always what it might have been instead, right?

Tracy Scops

Also really hope there's a second issue of this (with my suggestions above too), maybe with Carol, Kamala, and Riri Williams

Lazarus0024

Thought it was great, though if Jess and Hazmat hadn't automatically pushed the eggs off screen and had instead birthed them in an extra page or two more I think it would have been even better. (Carol going through the same thing would've been great too)

Lazarus0024


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