This probably has to be top 5 favorite pages! The tension made here is superb! I love how you added an element of resistance to Megan that not wanting to get too fat that creates so much character depth. Hopefully weโll get to see more of that in upcoming chapters and see how Greg, Gregโs mother, and the baker team up to get her fatter regardless of that obstacle. Canโt wait for the next parts of this scene๐ Maybe weโll see Greg stop by the bakerโs house and the baker convinces both Greg and Meg to stay and Greg follows the bakers idea and โjoins them for dinnerโ mischievously to get Meg to eat more. Also as a future project hopefully weโll get to see Greg and his mother team up with the baker and get a sequence of Meg on the same day taste testing with the baker during the day and Greg bringing her back to his momโs for dinner to Megโs surprise and shock for her birthday or something.
Yishkobob
2025-12-29 18:59:02 +0000 UTC
I hope she fully decides to give into her cravings soon! ^v^