Quest Academy: Saviours (Chapters 55, 56, 57, 58, 59, 60, 61 and 62)
Added 2024-05-13 14:28:18 +0000 UTCHey Everyone,
Happy Monday, it's been a hell of a week and it's time for some more chapters. I'm working on the next ones now, and finished up the most recent chapter about five minutes ago. There's not enough coffee to keep me going, but I'm getting there.
As always, I'm loving the comments and thoughts from all of you. I genuinely love seeing how invested all of you are with the story and characters. I wasn't sure how people would react to the 'Perfect' ability, but I'm glad that it was a hit.
Now we're moving into the fun parts of the Tower, and I'm excited to write it.
Let me know what you think! :)
Brian
Comments
We don't know how a Switch works.
Alteron
2024-06-25 09:06:20 +0000 UTCSal has analyzed Brophy. Would a Switch show up on an analysis?
Sam
2024-06-25 04:12:15 +0000 UTCTheir bodies have no essence, so near zero synchronicity with abilities. That condition ability might be the key though.
R. Maxwell Steele
2024-06-17 22:20:35 +0000 UTCSynergy of the healing potions, perfect skill, AND Vanessa brute forcing his gates would have let him power through all his gates in one go.
R. Maxwell Steele
2024-06-17 22:19:47 +0000 UTCrefresh,....... refresh,..........
Kevin Squalls
2024-05-20 23:46:55 +0000 UTCI hope Brophy becomes a real friend. I like him despite his issues, but I'm disliking Erika more and more. I hope she doesn't get any of them killed.
Rinalda13
2024-05-20 21:20:46 +0000 UTCMaybe a new John Wick is born :-)
Alteron
2024-05-18 21:04:13 +0000 UTCHow close are we to the Saviours class selection (time-line wise)? I feel like it should happen before the book ends (since it's on the title), but there's only so much you can fit into 20ish 2k words chapters. Also, if it does happen, I really hope we can know at least some of the names and abilities and that it doesn't end on a cliffhanger regarding that.
Davi(d)
2024-05-17 10:41:22 +0000 UTCI think it’s definitely worth it
b bor
2024-05-16 16:15:24 +0000 UTCA lot of readers hate them, so I'm not sure. Thinking about it though
James Northman
2024-05-16 16:08:40 +0000 UTCRough guess is 85
James Northman
2024-05-16 16:08:09 +0000 UTCI like the idea of her wearing the amulet also in classes (and that she needs the silence) but I think it would only come to pass if she really fails in a test that was hinted at taking part within the tower. But she did know the question to an answer from one of the team that shows she paid attention. I think her final test of character will be when she chooses her implant ability: will she choose something that makes her stronger or will she go for something to block hearing thoughts all the time...
Nina Speicher
2024-05-16 16:01:42 +0000 UTCMy main thoughts this week are: who is the mysterious crafter that made the armor that Sal bought for Berry? And does Brophy have a second skill? I think Sal identified/analysed him with the visor previously (and figured out he was Gallant), so that should have detected the second ability I guess. That would leave an object with an ability as to explain why he can rate items. The visor analysis probably also would have also given a hint about Brophy being a doppelgänger though, so not sure if I missed a hint about it or if Brophy is simply himself with an additional item that can identify. Really liked the chapters and can't wait for the curveball next week!
Nina Speicher
2024-05-15 21:02:04 +0000 UTCTwo things, is the perfect ability going to make itself permanent on its own and is Sal about to dominate the tower with his pistol and visor?
Dale Medford
2024-05-15 17:03:58 +0000 UTCHow many chapters do you think Saviours will end up with?
Sloth
2024-05-15 15:06:30 +0000 UTCOr one of the main guilds, recieving reports about Sal
Alteron
2024-05-15 12:43:25 +0000 UTCAre we going to get a 3rd party POV? For example someone from Bastion… it would be interesting to read when they first here about Sal
b bor
2024-05-15 05:55:51 +0000 UTCI am liking Sal’s confidence in himself! The perfect ability is perfect for him. I feel like it can apply to not just skills but other esoteric matters such as speech, reading into people and charisma
b bor
2024-05-14 22:17:00 +0000 UTCThat was my thoughts as well. Especially when she wanted to go off alone with Ioseph. I could see her ditching the suppressing amulet & controlling him for her own benefit.
Karen Shelton
2024-05-14 19:32:50 +0000 UTCI'm interest in seeing Sal and Grant get to gether after the tower, and lay down so rules to Weaves leading to down the road an comprehasive theory about Weave design (long way off) Also next steps for them get Sal to adjust Skill Weave incremental up through the ranks to see if there are any common elements. Can a skill weave be locked at a certain rank can a skill weave unlocked. and you close off a weave from evolving, can you open one up. So far Sal as only discover 4 Grades in Skill Family. With the top rank being 25. yet his Skill Master has a potential rank of 30 so are there 5 Grades
Mark Palmer
2024-05-14 17:37:06 +0000 UTCI'm hopeing Sal enchourges Brophy in to better cousling and maybe builds an illisume train night cap like him and Barry talk about. Or maybe some other Medation training aid.
Mark Palmer
2024-05-14 17:25:49 +0000 UTCIt was stated that she was a top mark student before Chatfield's changes. if i was a Student i would be wondering if she wasn't just 'mind reading' the anwser and expectation from the teachers and didn't actually learn anything. and this situation in the tower is just going to highlight how she as been coasting a long. The Question is will she learn now? I personally thing she should wear the restricting amulate during classes out side of Training her ablity and combat. wheather that imposed and something she decides to do. Might be good for her not to be able to hear everyones thoughts all the time.
Mark Palmer
2024-05-14 17:18:39 +0000 UTCYou're welcome. I think this wasn't the first time one week was mentioned between the end of Sal's excursion and the tower attempt. I don't remember what chapter it was but It was mentioned before that the tower attempt will start as soon as the other teams, who spent four weeks in the excursion, came back. I was surprised initially at the time as their shouldn't be time to attend classes for the other teams.
Abdulmohsen
2024-05-14 16:48:08 +0000 UTCThat is correct! Well done, sir. Thank you 😊
James Northman
2024-05-14 16:38:37 +0000 UTCI think the timeline needs looked at again Brian. Prestige said that it's been a week since she last saw Ericka but that can't be right. Sal and his team came a week early from the excursion, a week before Divinity and Barry's teams, then he spent time with his friends going to classes and training so it should be at least two weeks since the excursion.
Abdulmohsen
2024-05-14 14:56:01 +0000 UTCGood point. I mean growth or repair can actually have some effect on the team at large as well as do their job. I feel like she ability wise she can only do her job. And with the trust levels on her tram she cant rven do that. Its a shitty situation she caused herself.
Robert Smart
2024-05-14 09:06:49 +0000 UTCShe's experiencing the Tower like a lot of the other students who have abilities like Repair and Growth. Things that won't help them at all in a combat scenario. As a Controller, she needs to be able to make decisions and guide her team as a Leader, and she doesn't need an ability to do that. :)
James Northman
2024-05-14 08:52:57 +0000 UTCWahoo in the tower. Isnt erika without powers just a normie? How can she be at all effective in a combat situation? I would have excluded her from the tower run if i was managing the thing.
Robert Smart
2024-05-14 06:59:28 +0000 UTCI been thinking that Sal’s skill implantation improvement should get a massive reaction from bastion and allies in Major factions because they don’t have abilities or broken abilities now Sal can take common abilities combined and improved multiple abilities that can be implanted .So after returning from the tower they can blast news channels with new breakthrough in skill implantation development lead by bastion and the work to uplift the common people or are they going to lean to a more cloak and dagger backroom plotting development or a mixed approach
Branden platt
2024-05-14 05:57:38 +0000 UTCSolid!!
Michael Dunsdon
2024-05-14 03:37:33 +0000 UTCI’m hoping once Brophy/Gallant’s power is under his control his personality stabilizes. I like his character. Erika is the person everyone loves to dislike.
Dawn Zeleznik
2024-05-14 03:17:09 +0000 UTCIm pondering, could Brophy be a Switch, on his last mission he gets Switched, and don’t have his abilities anymore.
Alteron
2024-05-14 00:47:04 +0000 UTCYay we FINALLY made it to the tower! Great chapters.
Tim Walloch
2024-05-14 00:45:12 +0000 UTCJust had a thought, in chapter 55 you mention Sal has 3 crests, doesn't he have 4? You didn't mention the one he got from Quest for the tournament
Thomas Todd
2024-05-13 23:12:24 +0000 UTCErika really is a mess with her ability cut. She already has trust issues, and it just gets worse when she can't take a look at what everyone around her is thinking.
Sébastien Kingsbury
2024-05-13 21:38:33 +0000 UTCI can see that. It's not what he is saying but the implications he is making. Hard to do that in writing without explicitly stating it.
Aaron Johnson
2024-05-13 21:26:55 +0000 UTCI think she has that ability with just her mind reading but as you state she ignores that as unimportant. Having an ability that forces her to relive that part would have to be her having no control of it like is gallant's issue.
Aaron Johnson
2024-05-13 21:18:07 +0000 UTCSo, the weaves stuff is fun for Sal. The solution for Brophy is something he 'has' rather than something he enjoyed finding. I wanted there to be a clear difference between them.
James Northman
2024-05-13 20:33:39 +0000 UTCThis might be cruel, but as we know abillities can have drawbacks orceven negative effects. I would love or atleast find it interesting if sal added something like that to erika's abillity in the form of empathy (showing what her actions through her abbility but also her demeanor has on people good and bad in a pov of the person shes using it on. And even going as far as reliving these visions or atleast the general feelings they radiate when she activates it. So for example she would use it on sal and then she would see the anger feel the pain and suffering her actions have caused others. This also cus i feel like shes activly ignoring those emotions when using her abbility.
Joran Spans
2024-05-13 20:14:47 +0000 UTCI kind of agree but ive known real people that are just like her.
Michael Holden
2024-05-13 19:59:08 +0000 UTCCh 60 Sal made contact with Gallant and they exchanged a small smile before Rochelle exited the changing area.-> Sal made eye contact...
Aaron Johnson
2024-05-13 19:19:13 +0000 UTCAgain great chapters
Alteron
2024-05-13 18:34:17 +0000 UTCI think having could work, he saying working on weaves has been fun and also the result is good
Thomas Todd
2024-05-13 17:50:35 +0000 UTCCh 55 "It's been fun working on the weaves, and having a potential solution for Brophy. Shouldn't having be finding here?
Aaron Johnson
2024-05-13 17:24:49 +0000 UTCI like how Perfect fits in as an OP training accelerator but not immediate god status. Interesting to see Erika double and triple down on her anger. I wonder where you're taking that plotline and if she's going to pull something in the Tower even under Prestige's nose
BaguaBrady
2024-05-13 16:45:29 +0000 UTCI can't wait to see how his shooting improves and what not
John Curtis
2024-05-13 15:47:08 +0000 UTCLove These chapters
Valentin
2024-05-13 15:42:44 +0000 UTCGreat chapters, Prestige is swinging a little too hard in Sal's direction (not saying she shouldn't, just an observation). I actually feel a bit sorry for Erica here, she still massively deserves it but her insane casting around for answers and people to blame combined with her lack of understanding about why she's wrong is pitiable
Thomas Todd
2024-05-13 15:30:05 +0000 UTCLove it! I hate being a fast reader. Those went by too quick!
Zachary Cash
2024-05-13 15:21:40 +0000 UTC8 chapters!!!! Doing my HaPpY dance…. Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Karen Shelton
2024-05-13 15:19:50 +0000 UTCThank God ! This shits better then crack
hey man
2024-05-13 14:54:02 +0000 UTCOh I’m taking a’ mental’ break at work right now!
Jeremy
2024-05-13 14:39:29 +0000 UTCI was looking forward to your name showing up in the feed!!! I am working but cannot wait till later so I’ll put them on read out loud!
b bor
2024-05-13 14:36:00 +0000 UTCBook 2 is up for pre-order on Audible as well.
Andrew Tobin
2024-05-13 14:31:10 +0000 UTC
