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Jeanne d'arc Alter WIP

Not sure If it looks good enough... I can't figure out what's wrong with this illustration that seems off to me ( ー̀εー́ )

Should I try continuing it or draw something else?

Jeanne d'arc Alter WIP Jeanne d'arc Alter WIP

Comments

Would love to see you finish it!! Looks amazing :)

ScaryDuck2

looks great! You could try raising the horizon to see if the perspective fits better, since she's depicted at a high angle

gbb

I think it looks good. I also love the colors. What caught my eye though was the position of the chest and butt while both being seen at the same time. Maybe if one was shown less the twist of the body would feel more natural. But at the end of day I love the drawing anyway and it can also be a stylistic choice so whatever you decide will be good 👍. I hope you keep drawing it because it looks awesome.

fireice

absolutely beautiful lighting (and art), have you considered doing attack on titan before, i think it would look amazing in your style :3

ceo_of_jessie

Id love for you to finish it - but only if it's not too much of a bother to you. I think it looks amazing so far!

venthros

I 2nd this

MeesterYellow

Never thought I'd see my favourite artist do Jalter, can't wait to see the final version!

Matthew Sharpe

I would like to see the end result if its not a chore to finish it 🍷

Jesty


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