English process
Added 2021-04-26 13:41:46 +0000 UTCPlease tell me if this sounds good ๐
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I'd tweak Goku's line from, "I accept the combat!" to something less formal, like "I accept!", or "Sure, sounds fun!"
Sir_Loin_Stake_Cakes
2021-04-29 06:29:20 +0000 UTCThank you so much for your help!
YAMAMOTO DOUJIN
2021-04-26 20:19:04 +0000 UTCPersonally I would change "You dare?" to "You down?", "I accept the combat" to "OK, challenge accepted!" and "There is nothing better to heal wounds!" to "Nothin' better to heal your wounds!"
Punisher
2021-04-26 17:07:15 +0000 UTCIm down with Dragonslayers comments
ONROK
2021-04-26 15:10:16 +0000 UTCOr Goku could say something more like "Alright, challenge accepted."
James Sullivan
2021-04-26 14:36:12 +0000 UTCAnd change her question to you down? It is a form of slang
The Dragonslayer
2021-04-26 14:35:00 +0000 UTCCaulifla should say โWeโve come to challenge you to a rematchโ
Karina
2021-04-26 14:34:31 +0000 UTCChange to โalright I accept your challengeโ
The Dragonslayer
2021-04-26 14:33:57 +0000 UTCVery good.
2021-04-26 13:58:15 +0000 UTC"There is" is another example of two words that can be contracted in English to "There's". The English itself is otherwise great, but we tend to use contractions where possibly- almost habitually - so I hope that helps
Ochaco1
2021-04-26 13:51:57 +0000 UTCGokuโs not casual
The Dragonslayer
2021-04-26 13:46:56 +0000 UTCOr to make it more country form of speaking "Nothin' better to heal the wounds"
SparkingSaiyan
2021-04-26 13:46:00 +0000 UTCAll good, the only thing would be the "there's nothing better" instead of "there is nothing better"... To make it sound more casual! :)
ONROK
2021-04-26 13:45:34 +0000 UTCYou can take out the โthere isโ to โnothinโ better than to heal your wounds then thisโ. It is more in line with Gokuโs county form of speaking
The Dragonslayer
2021-04-26 13:45:02 +0000 UTCYup all good
Pixel Slayer
2021-04-26 13:42:15 +0000 UTC
