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A little more help please ๐Ÿ’ฆI am not sure if its correct

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Maybe change โ€œYouโ€™re kidding?โ€ to โ€œAre ya kidding?โ€ to keep Gokuโ€™s country accent

Max Susinski

Make it "Are you kidding?" . Also make it cum and not come, finally make it, "Are you still resisting?"

OmarA

If not, to properly state a question it could be "are you kidding?"

ONROK

This is correct.

beyondashadow

Change "come" to "cum"

Zensu

Probably change "do you still resist?" to "are you still resisting?"

Daniel Onuoha

"You continue to resist?" Or "You're still resisting?"

AlmightyGenos

Kefla can say โ€œwhy are you resistingโ€ and โ€œAre you ready to cum yet?โ€

The Dragonslayer

"Are you kidding? This is nothing!"

AlmightyGenos

It would say โ€œyou kidding, this is nothingโ€

The Dragonslayer

Maybe change the "do you still resist" to "why keep resisting"

SparkingSaiyan

Take out the youโ€™re and just make it you

The Dragonslayer

All good

Pixel Slayer


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