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Fat Farrah's New App

Fat Farrah they called her, She was so distraught that she would do anything, ANYTHING to get rid of her flab and, well, people are cruel. They just couldn’t let things lie. They pestered her about her weight constantly. They picked and prodded her unabashedly.


So when she saw the App on her phone she was incredibly tempted, it promised instant results, but also cost $500. It was her life savings! But instant results!? How could she pass up getting the body she craved.  


She was resisting the urge until she came across Mary. Mary was Gorgeous, but also a massive bitch. Farrah had never had lustful feelings about anyone like she had about Mary.  Mary didn’t need to wear heels, but she did because it made her taller and tower over everyone around her and she adored that. She also had the body of a goddess. A slender fit stomach with tits and booty to nearly match Jessica Rabbit. She appeared like a goddess, especially as she always wore the most recent fashion in the tightest possible sizes.  Often revealing her belly button or her bulging cleavage for everyone to drool over. Including Farrah.


What really tipped her over the edge was a conversation she overheard with Mary and a friend of hers. The friend had asked Mary if she was a lesbian who she would fuck.  With a completely straight face Mary said, “Uhhhh Me, of course, do you really think anyone else is hot enough to fuck me?”  The friend then saw Farrah eavesdropping and decided to be cruel.


“You wouldn’t give Fatty Farrah over there a shot with your pussy then?”


“God no! Ew! She’d be lucky to make it with Lunch Lady Doris”


“I bet she needs her to feed her and everything too!”


Mary and her friend had a good laugh while Farrah teared up and ran into the empty gym. No one hung out there. That’s what cinched it for her, she couldn’t hold herself back any longer. She opened up the phone app store page. She selected her savings and paid the $500. She was tired of being Fat farrah and if Mary wanted to fuck her doppleganger Farrah was going to make sure she was it.


The app downloaded and Farrah nervously opened it up. It was very basic, it was just a list of attributes, hair, lips, face, height, muscle, fat distribution, Seeing this screen disheartened Farrah even more. Did I literally waste my life savings on a scam!? She played with a the hair setting at first. She selected long, thick and wavy, just like Mary’s She punched the accept button. It greyed out as soon as she did. But she didn’t feel anything. she even reached up and felt around in her ratty hair, nothing had changed. She noticed a bland avatar had appeared at the bottom of the list, and on top of it’s head was some long and wavy hair.


No! No no no nonono!  Farrah thought. She did not just waste her life savings on an avatar creator! She played with the lips meter to plump them up a bit, accept! annnnnnd NOTHING!  FUCK! Farrah started to cry, real tears dropped onto her screen. Her tears magnified the edge and she noticed  that she hadn’t scrolled all the way down yet. She swiped up a bit more and a button labeled Active appeared in glowing rainbow letters. She sniffed and wiped her tears away. One last chance, One last hope, she closed her eyes and pleaded as she let her thumb push the button.


There was a familiar DING! and she opened one eye and cocked an eyebrow. That, Sounded, good? She waited what seemed like an eternity. but soon an unfamiliar tingle washed across her scalp and lips. She reached up and touched, caressed and ran her fingers through her hair as it fell out of it’s ratty bun and fell down, soft, thick, wavy, and long. A smile creeped across her face, but she couldn’t stop pursing her lips. It felt like she was kissing the air unintentionally in front of herself.  


She ran to the locker rooms in front of one of the full length mirrors. She looked at her face. Oh wow my lips! They are so soft and pillow looking! Then her eyes opened wide. Holy fuck! It works! Farrah looked down at the app again. she selected some alluring eye make up with fantastic lashes. ACTIVATE DING! her eyes blinked a few times as they felt unnaturally heavy and then popped open looking bigger and fantastic with the new make up around them. She raised her cheekbones up ACTIVATE, and gave her hair a lot more volume DING! and before she knew it farrah had the head of a supermodel. But it was still stuck on a flabby rotund body. 


She looked up the body modifications on her app. First label she saw was abs. Excellent!  She always dreamed of having abs, so she selected abs and slipped it maybe halfways up the scale. ACTIVATE! She bit her lip as it seemed to be loading. DING! It was accepted! She let out a gasp of glee. She looked down at her stomach and felt it cramp. To her horror she watched it begin to swell bigger. What! NO! This isn’t what I asked for!  The five buttons of her fly popped open as her overflowing belly flopped out even more. WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK! I asked for abs not flabs! She looked down at the app and selected biceps, she slipped it halfway up again. ACTIVATE. She felt her arms pump and tense like she was doing some heavy lifting. She watched the  sleeves get tight but it still just looked like she got fatter in the arms. WHAT THE FUCK! Then she remembered. That one selection that hardly made any sense. Fat distribution.


Farrah opened it up and saw three options. Breasts, Buttocks, and belly. It finally clicked for her, the aps gave her muscle, but underneath all the fat she already had. Now she just needed to redistribute it. but where? She remembered Mary, and her massive tits, and how Mary would only be with a clone of herself She set up the percentages. 75% Breasts, 15% Buttocks, 10% Belly.  That should do it. Deep breath in ACTIVATE Slow breath out DING! The breath of preparation was a very good idea, as her breathing became very rapid. Soon she felt as if she could only breathe in as her chest heaved. She felt her stomach getting looser and looser in her white pants. Her ass swelled in the back, it seemed like it was the only thing holding her pants up. Farrah looked down to watch her belly shrink, but her breasts were swelling much too big in front of her to see it looking down. She turned to give her self a profile in the mirror and gasped audibly and  watched as the fat was sucked from her stomach into her tits which were just Ballooning out, bigger and bigger with every heave. Farrah’s breathes were turning into moans and her hand was slowly sliding down the front of her ripped open fly. watching herself turn into a Mary clone was making her fucking hot!


She hardly noticed that her moans were getting louder as her ass swelled into her white pants, or that her fingers were being pushed deeper between her legs as her pants were getting tighter and Tighter and TIGHTER! Her moans were so lustful, so deep and so loud when she heard it.  When she heard her!?


“Fatty Farrah! Are you Masterbating in the locker room!?  Haha” Mary turned the corner to see the non-fat Farrah wrist deep her skin tight pants. “Holy fuck! You’re not Mary!  But you are masterbating! Who the fuck are you!?” Mary stepped up to  Farrah swaying her hips the whole way. Holy fucksticks do those hips make me drip! Farrah thought. Mary stepped up to Farrah and Farrah was surprised that with all that she had done to herself she was still the same height. Mary smiled and cocked her eyebrow as she looked down at Farrah. “Look sugar tits. You may have just fantastic tits,” Mary made an intake of breath that nearly sounded like a slurp. Was She Drooling? Over Me!? “But I’m the head bitch here! And as long as my magnificent globes are over your, *deep sharp inhale* just bangable tits. God how’d you get a body like this. *Ahem* right, as long as your fuckable body is shorter than me I’m in charge! You got that!?”


Farrah looked into Mary’s eyes and saw how they were traveling all over her body. Farrah knew then that she found the crack in Mary’s armor and she was ready to exploit it. She slipped off her shoes as she looked at Mary. “yes Miss.” She selected the height option on her app. She slowly placed her phone down on the ground. “As Long as I’m shorter than you, You will always be in charge.” She slid her toe along the meter sliding the meter up 20% “What is it I can do for you miss.” Farrah played with her gorgeous breasts, caressed them, and stroked them, practically hypnotizing Mary with them.


“God that’s hot.” Mary moaned. “Can I see them?”


Farrah giggled “hee hee. Is that what a mistress does?” ACTIVATE “Does she ask like that?”Ding!


“I-I-I- Um. No Uh” Mary Stammered “Shhhhhow them to me” Her arousal had stolen her ability to speak in her vindictiv tone.


“Mmmmmmmm” Farrah Moaned. Her torso and legs began to stretch up as she moaned a soft orgasmic, “Yes miss.” She inched taller and taller and taller. Her shirt was never going to tuck into her pants now. She opened her eyes and realized that instead of staring at Mary’s nipples, she was now staring at her soft kissable lips.


“Fuck me Sugartits! What are you doing!?” Mary look down at Farrah, just not as much as before.


Farrah’s toe slipped over her phone screen. “I’m” ACTIVATE “Growing!” DING!


Mary backed up and watched Farrah stretch up and up and up. She stroked the back of her neck with one hand and grabbed her wonderful round breast with the other. Mary grunted as her hand traveled from her neck and started to bunch up her skirt between her legs. “Fuck Me!” She grunted. “Fuck Me now! 


Farrah laughed and evil laugh. “I don’t know. I don’t think you’re in any position.”ACTIVATE! “To make any demands, And I don’t think.” DING! “You will ever be again.” Farrah grabbed Mary’s shoulders and spun her around and slammed her against the wall. She grabbed Mary’s hand and jammed it between her own legs. “Now Rub tiny Mary.”


“Yes Miss.” Mary rubbed the outside of Farrah’s white pants and felt her crotch get wetter and wetter. Then she felt them getting smoother and smoother as Farrah swelled inside them. 


Brrriiiiip!  the seam down her thigh split open. “Fuck yes!” SHriiip the seam down the left side of her shirt burst open. “Fuck yes More!” Farrah screamed even louder as the growth stopped just shy of giving her an orgasm and Mary whined. “Fuuuuuuck!” she pounded the wall above Mary’s head and it cracked all the way down. She gasped and chuckled. “Little Mary.”


“Oh fuck that’s hot call me that again.”


Farrah smiled. “Little Mary.” Mary’s eyes rolled in pleasure as it looked like she just about came from the sound of her new nickname. “Pick up my phone Little Mary


“Yes Miss” Mary breathed and picked up Farrah’s phone.


“Show me your fucking tits Little Mary” Farrah Demanded.


“OOoooohhHHhhhmmmmMMmm.” Mary shuddered in pleasure at the sound of her new name. Her breathing was rapid as she practically ripped her shirt off her shoulders. She could not get her bra off fast enough and one of the straps popped off in the process. “Like this Miss?  Does this please you miss?” 


Farrah slipped her hand between Mary’s legs. She slipped her pinky around the crotch of her panties and slipping it slowly between her wet juicy lips. Farrah Chuckled about how her pinkie was inside Mary but her thumb was grazing just below her breasts. “Now” Farrah Said, “Press ACTIVATE”


ACTIVATE








DING!


“Ooooooh God yessssss” Farrah moaned as her Body swelled Bigger and Big- SNAP! her pants popped from around her waist and fell below her knees. She had her eyes closed but if she hadn’t she would have seen Mary’s eyes comically get wider and wider along with her grin as Her Pinkie swelled thicker and longer Between Mary’s lips.


Mary was shocked to notice that her pinkie was getting so close to her G Spot. but even more shocked to find Farrah’s thumb just out of reach of her tongue. Fuck, She Didn’t know if she could take Much more.


ACTIVATE 


ACTIVATE


ACTIVATE 


ACTIVATE 


ACTIVATE


DING!


DING!


DING!


DING!


DING!


“Was that, Fou- Five!!  FIVE! Miniscule Mary What have you dooooooOOOOOOOHHHHhhhhhmmmmmmyyyyy Fuuuuuuuck!” The Ground shook under Farrah’s quaking body, Her thumb slowly pushed up between Mary’s tits and Mary wrapped her arm around it and started to lick the tip more and more and more. “Oh fuck don’t do that microscopic Mary!” Farrah flipped on her back and her head slowly pushed against one wall of the locker room while her feet were pushing up against the other. “Shit Shit Shit Shiiiiiit!” Mary resisted as much as she could. “Fucking you Mini Maaaaary!” another wave of pleasure passed over Farrah’s Spine She took her hand which Mary was now practically glued to and jammed it between her legs. “Fuck! You! Mary!” She thrust Mary deeper and deeper inside herself and wiggled inside trying to please her own aching pussy then she felt little micro vibrations coming from inside her. DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! They just kept happening! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! DING! Mary was going crazy as she was buried in Farrah’s twat!


“Shit shit shit fucking shit!” Farrah screamed as she crammed tighter and tighter inside the locker room. “fucking god damned! UGH! UNGH! UGNHHHH!” She started pounding her fists against a wall. trying to break her Swelling body free, mini thrusting onto her Pinkie and Mary as the little dings vibrated inside her.


“fuck Fuck FUCK FUCK! FUCK!! FUUUUCK!!!”Farrah pounded herself up against the walls as they finally broke under her strength and she Stretched out across Campus letting free a stream of wet juices flooding the courtyard in her cum.


Farrah slowly pulled Mary from her pussy and brought her very very close to her giant face.”Now, Who’s in charge?” Farrah gasped between breathes. 


Mary was cross eyed with glee and absently tapping the phone but there was no more ding notifications coming from it. She plucked the tiny phone from Mary’s death grip to find that she was saved by the one thing every Coed dreads. A dead battery.

Comments

Pretty hot. :)

Cezar Nix


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