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Born of Black and Blue [Chapter 30]

Alternative Title: In which I write my first fighting scene and need feedback.

Like, really, please tell me how it read like, I have no fucknig experience at all with this and I have to shamefully admit that I mostly skip fighting scenes in fics and books because I find it hard to visualize it, so.... yeah, lmao. Also, this was supposed to be just a scene to start the chapter, but it ended up growing too big so I just turned it into its own thing.

Ken, Max, Nathan, Rampant_Radish, Shinatobe and Mike - Thank you guys so much! Hope you all like it!


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