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Red Hot Riding Hood - page4. Sexy nun.

Dear patrons,

I finished page 4. Initially, the characters were supposed to be different, but I decided to remember the good old movies, and already in the process, I made changes. I love to improvise.😊

I hope you recognize all the characters in this scene.

Also, I am happy to share with all the patrons the exclusive art of the nun from March 2021. I did not make any changes to this art, so there is no point in uploading these files again.

I will leave a link to a folder with old exclusive rewards for Pro and Guru patrons.

Nun old HD reward    PRO reward https://www.patreon.com/posts/48236794

                                          GURU reward https://www.patreon.com/posts/48236270

You will access your rewards by clicking on the links below, and the comic is in the "RED HOT RIDING HOOD"  folder.

Amateur https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kAwuDLAVxMe3KLh1z77wtZmAwfJIxH4J?usp=sharing

Pro https://www.patreon.com/posts/66005848

Guru https://www.patreon.com/posts/66005580

Thank you!


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Comments

I know. You're a class act. I can't wait for the next panel. How long will the comic be?

Carlos

Thanks! Just some of my imagination of your mythical world. Why I chose to use the eccentric word "yo". Very popular 90s genre to shock and amaze, used by some dark and light skin individuals such as a form of greeting as in "Yo, my homie!" or in criticism "Yo momma!" Looks like after 30 years it's still able to get a shocking response.

x-wilderness-x

And now I understand everything.) It's all right, don't worry, it's just a fantasy. In my scenario, the dialogue will be somewhat different.

Rino99

No. Not in the panel. In the comments below, X-Wilderness-x added a line for Jessica and Shanique. The line for Shanique was what I was commenting about. Your panel was great, particularly the dialogue for the Bad Boys and for the other Orc officer, and I pointed that out.

Carlos

What the hell are you talking about???

ShinjiTao

I don't understand what dialogue you mean. Shanique only appears in the last panel and has no dialogue.

Rino99

The comic is great but X-Wilderness-x dialogue for Shanique was badly stereotypical and insulting. Kind of killed a great panel. Why have her character speak in broken English? The other orc doesn't. Perhaps it's because of her name? Despite the blaxploitation movies and television shows that pander to people who want to feel superior, the vast majority of black people don't speak that way and find it insulting. Take Will Smith and Martin Lawrence in the same panel for example. Plain English and it took nothing away from the scene. That said, X's line was good; the so-called ebonic dialect was insulting and unnecessary.

Carlos

Yeah, I try to make comics fun and memorable. Thanks for your feedback 😊

Rino99

doesn't sound right?

Rino99

thank! You have great dialogue 👍👍

Rino99

I won't reveal Roger's line. His wife deserves more attention

Rino99

😊I'm sure you heard it

Rino99

Let's see... Who Framed Roger Rabbit, Bad Boys, Breaking Bad... all on one page. And the hits keep on coming!

Carlos

"Shut yo' mouth'? Really?

Carlos

Mike: You have the right to remain silent. You Roger? Because, I'm Mike Lowrey! [Meanwhile in the interrogation room.] Jessica: I promise I’m not hiding anything. Shanique: Shut yo’mouth while I finish this cavity search. Awesome work Rino!!!

x-wilderness-x

🤔 Shanique. where have i heard that name before?

Phoenix_Pipe94

Roger might be framed (again), but his wife(?) does her best to keep him our of jail? :D

punarotta

Thank you!

Rino99

Thank you very much, Moki )

Rino99

yes they are )

Rino99

Damn you're good.

Kreus

And Bryan Cranston/Walter White 😭😂

Kreus

That's just awesome :-D

Moki

Thats fuckin will smith and martin lawence!! LOL

Devin Dickie


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