Chapter 108 – Life 62, Age 79, Martial Disciple Peak
Added 2024-06-07 12:00:13 +0000 UTCA soldier took me to a small cultivation room on the edge of the palace complex.
“Swallow this,” he ordered once I was seated in the room.
He handed me a pill that I didn’t recognize. I held it in my hands, examining it for a couple seconds, but the soldier’s demeanor suggested that he wanted me to take it without delay. I didn’t know the exact effects of the pill, but I could tell that it was some type of poison. I didn’t seem to have any choice though, so I put it in my mouth and swallowed.
Pain lanced through me and all of the qi in my body trembled. He had indeed given me a poison, but not a poison for the physical body. It was one that only acted on the energy in my body.
My cultivation base began to fall into a weakened state, and it felt like it might collapse. I was a Martial Disciple, and what he had given me was at least a rank 2 poison. I had almost no resistance to a pill of this power.
“Swallow this,” he said, handing me another pill.
This time I easily recognized it as a Rank 3 Qi Gathering Pill. To me, it felt like a terrible idea to give such a pill to a Disciple, but the soldier just looked at me emotionlessly. He wasn’t willing to take ‘no’ for an answer.
I swallowed the pill.
“Give me access to your qi,” he commanded.
Relying on my ability I instinctively gave him control. He reached into my body and began twisting qi similar to how I had done it for… for Mei…
He began braiding my qi. Everywhere he worked, I felt a sharp, stabbing pain. The poison he had given me earlier acted to alleviate the problems caused by calcification, but the way it did so was torture. My body was in agony both from the poison coursing through my system and the feeling of my flesh being ripped apart as meridians were slowly constructed.
The soldier was skilled though, and he was able to complete both of the meridians in my chest in less than a day. That told me that he had both high affinities and a lot of experience doing this.
To me, the biggest worry now was that my meridians followed the slave technique. This put me in a far more dangerous position than I had been in before. I considered trying to disperse the meridians he created and finding a way to forge new ones on my own, but this deep into calcification, I wasn’t sure I could manage it. If I significantly increased my water affinity, maybe, but it would be a risk.
I had cultivated a different Rank 1 technique, I had the resistance enhancement from the system, and I didn’t plan to go past Martial Master 1, I convinced myself that I would be able to protect myself from any mental influences from only these two meridians.
Once both meridians were complete, the soldier spent several minutes examining my body, checking to confirm that the job had been done correctly. I noticed that the meridians he had created were far more complex than those I had made in the past.
Once he was satisfied with what he was seeing, the soldier nodded his head and looked me in the eye.
“Follow,” he ordered.
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I was taken to a dilapidated building on the western edge of the palace complex.
The gardens were overgrown, and there were weeds poking out everywhere. The cobblestones and the sides of the building were caked in dirt. I didn’t hear any sounds of movement from within the courtyard.
Above the entrance hung the sign ‘Cold Wind Palace.’ The ‘palace’ was large enough to house dozens of people, but it felt abandoned.
When the soldier brought me inside, I saw a young man sitting alone in the lotus position in the middle of the main hall. The young man was concentrating on cultivating, but the soldier didn’t give it any mind.
“Prince CaoHan,” he said, “Steward Fang has been assigned to you.”
After saying this, he didn’t wait for a reply. He simply turned around and walked out of the building.
I felt awkward standing there right inside the building threshold, but what was I supposed to do? My ability told me to just stand still and wait for orders from the prince, so that’s what I did.
The prince continued cultivating silently for several hours without even looking at me, so I just stood there and watched him.
I examined him with qi vision and saw that he was a Martial Disciple 1 who had never drawn any energy into his body. He was practicing creating his first qi filter, but his movements were rather inept, and he struggled with creating even the most basic shapes.
When he applied a filter to his arm and began to try and pull in qi, his filter collapsed immediately. From what I could tell, his affinity had to be in the nine-star range.
When he finally gave up, he gave me a cold look. He was angry, not at me, but at the world.
“Prepare dinner,” he instructed.
I gave a bow, turned, and did as ordered.
Over the next several days, this situation continued as the prince spent all his time working on basic cultivation while I performed simple tasks to keep him fed and clothed.
After days of practice, I noticed that the prince had finally been able to create a filter capable of remaining intact as he drew in qi. However, I noticed that the purity of the qi he was pulling in was abysmal. It wasn’t my responsibility to step in at this point, but he didn’t have a teacher, and if he continued the path he was going down, he was going to ruin his future.
I probed my ability at this point to see if it was appropriate for me to step in, but I felt uncertain. I had not demonstrated any capacity to be able to teach him, and I wasn’t officially his teacher, so I had no responsibility to step in and help him. At the same time, there was nothing that would prevent me from doing so. If I had the ability to help, it was expected that I would do so in this situation.
I saw a lot of myself from the early days in this world in the prince. He was going down the same path I had when I first started cultivating, and I knew where that would lead him. I didn’t want someone else to make the same mistakes I had if I could prevent it.
Beyond that, if the prince continued down this path, he would have no future. If the prince had no future, I doubted if I would have much of a future either. It was in my best interest to keep him as sane as possible.
Making my decision I stepped forward.
“Prince CaoHan,” I said, speaking in a commanding voice. “Stop.”
He ignored me and continued to cultivate.
Not knowing what to say that could make him listen, I crossed the room, walked to his side, and pressed heavily on his shoulder to get his attention.
“Stop, prince.”
His qi scattered.
His eyes widened in anger as he slapped away my hand.
“How dare you!”
“Prince,” I bowed, “that is not the way. You need to perfect your qi filter first.”
“You dare lecture a prince on how to cultivate!?”
I kowtowed before him. “Apologies prince, but I must. If you continue down this path you will ruin your future. Please let me assist you.”
He visibly struggled with this request. He wanted to send me away, but he had to know the path he was on would only lead him to failure.
“Fine, assist me then,” he snarled.
“Prince, please allow me to look at your cultivation technique.”
He clenched his jaw and ground his teeth, but he relented and pulled a scroll from his robes.
“This is the Indomitable Earth Mantra. It is a secret technique of our dynasty. You will never speak of it to anyone. It is said that whoever successfully cultivates this technique can never lose.”
I opened the technique and quickly read through it. It was a basic Peak-Yellow earth qi cultivation technique, so I just needed to quickly note the filter design and the details for each acupoint.
The prince’s words about a person who cultivates it never being able to lose worried me. There was nothing about the technique that made the cultivator special. That meant this technique would create a mindset within the one who cultivated it that would make them believe they were unbeatable. It was a dangerous technique, but looking at the prince, I could sense I wouldn’t be able to talk him out of using it. The best I could do was help him cultivate it as well as possible.
Before I could help, I needed to know what I was working with.
“My prince, what is your earth affinity.”
His eyes blazed with anger, but his voice was cool and detached. “I was only granted a mid nine-star affinity.”
That was going to be a problem. Training him to be able to cultivate a Peak-Yellow technique perfectly would take years, and if he wanted to advance smoothly, he didn’t have that kind of time.
The thought of boosting his affinities popped into my head, but I quickly dismissed it. That would have been beyond foolhardy. I needed to take a different approach.
“My prince, please form a qi filter on your upper right arm.”
He was angry with his situation, but he was smart enough to know that he needed help, so after a quick snort, he complied.
I reached out with my affinities to try to fix the problems, but I didn’t have sufficient strength. I was only a Martial Master 1 with a mid eight-star earth affinity. Forcibly manipulating the qi in someone else’s body required either a high cultivation level or a high affinity, preferably both.
I considered my options. I couldn’t raise my cultivation, but there was nothing stopping me from raising my affinity. I had a Peak-Earth earth qi cultivation technique to try out, so I would want to raise my earth affinity soon anyway.
“System,” I subvocalized, “permanently raise my earth affinity to peak seven-star.”
Permanent Peak, 7-star Earth Affinity. Cost 172,500 credits. 149,660,775 credits remaining.
That should prove to be more than enough for what I needed to do.
I reached out and began manipulating the prince’s qi filter. As I did, his face showed discomfort, but he didn’t speak.
“My prince, this is the proper filter for your technique. Try to draw energy through it.”
As he did, I slowly relaxed my hold over the qi filter, expecting the prince to instinctively take control to stabilize it.
He didn’t
The qi filter began to wobble, so I reasserted my control.
“Prince, try to keep the filter steady.”
He tried, but he simply didn’t have the strength. The filter was too complicated for him, and managing that while keeping the qi flowing at the right angle and velocity was beyond him.
“Stop, my prince. We need to discuss this.”
I saw frustration on his face, but he relented and let go of his qi.
“Speak.”
I had started down this path, and I didn’t know where it would lead me, but I would commit myself to it because I expected that if I didn’t, I would be trapped as a servant for a cultivation-mad prince until I died.
“My prince, you need to make a clear decision about your future cultivation. There are a few ways to proceed, and you need to choose your path knowing the consequences of that choice.”
He simply nodded in acknowledgment.
“The first option is to proceed as you were before. Cultivate on your own and try to advance immediately. This will result in a severe mental influence that will control you for the rest of your life.”
“No.” His left eye twitched with annoyance.
“Second, you can try to find a way to increase your affini—”
“No.”
I nodded to his quick response.
“I could help you train your ability to cultivate on your own. With your current affinity, you will require a significantly stronger soul before you can even begin to practice your cultivation technique properly. I can help you train, but it will still take time.”
“How long?”
“I cannot be certain. At least ten year—”
“No.” He glared at me. “I must reach Martial Grandmaster before thirty.”
I sucked in a breath.
“Then I will need to directly assist you during cultivation. The only options you have are how much assistance I provide. The more I help, the better your foundation will be. However, if I control too much of the process, you may not have the experience you will need at later stages.”
He looked me directly in the eye with fierce determination.
“Do everything you can to make it perfect. I need a flawless foundation, but we must also hurry. The faster I can cultivate the better.”
Comments
Oh I get that part. He has an idea of having a break so he chooses a different path but wants to not waste this life with out progress to his goal. The choices from there are just what's infront of him, stubbornness, and atleast a bit of insanity. To me this fits with the character and what has happened to him even if I/we don't always agree with the direction you are taking things your still doing great! The part that feels contrived to me is the slavery like Mei is to her blessing. Then he gets a temp blessing that he blindly follows like Mei again. Then he starts working with someone outside of his blessing he is now lead by the same as Mei will need to do with him the next time they interact.
Aaron Johnson
2024-06-09 12:48:35 +0000 UTCGreat stuff. I love seeing how each past life affects his actions in the next, alongside the influence of various cultivation techniques. You've been super consistent and it's fun to see the changes slowly bleed into his actions and thoughts
Just Graham
2024-06-09 03:51:30 +0000 UTCI can see where you are coming from saying it feels contrived, but my goal here was to express a contradiction between what he says he wants 'living a normal life' and what he does 'anything but normal.' How many people say they 'just want a normal life?' How many of those people would actually be happy if they lived as a Walmart cashier? In my mind, this is what's happening. He says he wants normal, but at every single step he is pushing himself in away from that kind of life. This will probably need to be cleaned up in edits to make it smoother, but that is my idea behind what is happening in the last 5 chapters.
Greg Tolley
2024-06-09 00:21:08 +0000 UTCOn further thought, I think I should take a break from this, at least the Patreon side of it.
Ninetails
2024-06-08 21:49:45 +0000 UTCIt certainly feels very contrived. There are just too many things that don't quite fit together in how it is set up, and that tends to indicate that the author felt they needed to do something in a certain way, but could not quite get all the details to flow naturally. The way he simultaneously wants to take a break and live a normal life, while simultaneously still pushing for the seed just seems weird to be, and in principle doing both should be expected to accomplish neither. His behavior doesn't really fit with either thing, and it still being forced to work like that just screams of it being a forced development. My guess is he is supposed to accomplish something important related to the seed this life, such as actual getting it. Overall, I do find that that since Mei's blessing effectively got upgraded from a social blessing to a profetic control blessing taking the form of social hints the story has taken a decline, mainly due to how it poisons everything. It does not even have to do with manipulation of him, just the simple convenient "coincidence" it can set makes him effectively have the kind of "MC Luck" that was not in the story beforehand, and through the lack of that made everything he clawed his way to feel earned in much more satisfying way. Similarly, this life is also showing signs of convenient setup that he did not really work for, just to reach some goal the author wants, likely getting the seed. Heck I can even see him ending up rationalizing that the blessing manipulated him into this form just so he would have just the right mentality to take this kind of weird life that could be the shortest path to his goal. That would then make him somehow accept that manipulation as okay, for high in turn would build up him being more willingly grossly manipulated by her blessing in the future, which in turn would lead to all kinds of nasty places. I do hope that is not what the author has in mind, because that is a very depressing kind of story that I would not really want to experience, let support financial here.
Ninetails
2024-06-08 21:28:57 +0000 UTCThis life, he bough social comprehension and cultivation resistance upfront. With the overall idea of integrating more into society and living a 'normal' life. He just isn't good at doing that.
Greg Tolley
2024-06-08 01:46:34 +0000 UTCIs it just me or is this life feeling more and more like a contrived setup to make Feng understand Mei and her blessing better?
Aaron Johnson
2024-06-08 01:11:02 +0000 UTCI see Tolleys change here as good for the overall story. This will allow for more flexibility or adaptability especially as the lives get longer. However I think it needs to be a balanced. He should get something upfront based on his plans for each life. This life he didn't and still doesn't really have a plan. His spending in this life reflects that and even his long term spending feels frivolous to me even when I agree with them. So with his next life if he should get more affinities if he will be pushing further into alchemy but if he is going a martial path then he should start with upping only the affinities he will use to advance as well as cognitive upgrades for fighting style and fighting techniques. The balance between long term, short term, and flexibility will be a hard balancing act that can add more uncertainty to the story.
Aaron Johnson
2024-06-08 01:07:28 +0000 UTCIt depends on how the empire is set up and how many princes there are. If it is a hereditary empire than it is likely the emperor has a lot of kids with his wives and or concubines over their long life. With cultivation any without would likely be killed or otherwise discarded. Those that can cultivate are useful. Low cultivation would relegate them to government officials or warriors in the army depending on how far they go the higher the positions so might as well give them a cultivation method to match. The rest that have high cultivation potential are likely the only true heirs.
Aaron Johnson
2024-06-08 00:39:07 +0000 UTCNo idea where MC is going with this… but the “I convinced myself…” doesn’t bode well! Painful slave death incoming I reckon
Tommy
2024-06-07 17:53:43 +0000 UTCI think one should have a bit more nuance to all of this. Some useful things to factor in is how expensive the purchases are, whether what you are buying is permanent and whether those things are just straight up good without needing to consider downsides, and lastly whether he has plans that means he needs to save for something else. Considering these, then buying things that are relatively cheap, that are permanent, and mostly purely beneficial that he is expected to have a use for within at least a few lives while not getting in the way of his plans are generally good options. If they are that cheap, then he might as well get them early and reap the incidental benefits. For instance we know that 5 elements 7* peak are what he needs to basically keep his income and do perfect grandmaster pills, which he is assumed to want to use most of his lives, while their combined cost is less than 1% of his bank to get as permanent. Basically it is cheap and likely a good investment. Comparatively going to 6* peak is expensive, though still likely worth it, but that purchase makes more sense to wait until he has more of a need for it. In the same vein it also makes sense for him to buy some cheap boosts for things not that central to the plan, but which could help him. For instance buying a 20k comprehension buff on small things like etiquette, governance, beast taming and so on makes sense. At this point he can afford to make such purchases whenever something slightly fancies him, or even just to deal with subgoals or other such issues. They might not bring game changing effects, but we know from his early comprehension buffs at that level that they do seem to help enough at especially the early parts that they make sense to pick up. Those would naturally be more of an emergent purchase though. On the other hand spending 25 million on such things at the moment would be very much overkill unless he has a good reason for it.
Ninetails
2024-06-07 15:42:13 +0000 UTCi don't rly like this arc, this is the first time in this entire life he's shown any agency. agency is the 1 thing someone in his predicament should have in spades
Amazon Shopper
2024-06-07 15:10:24 +0000 UTCmy first reaction was that it is dumb to only spend only when needed and thought budgetting would be better. keeping an emergency fund for temporary purchases and slowly rising the standard. But then, death is not an issue, it's just lost time. You can push the limit of the current build while shoring weaknesses along the way. It may not be the perfect solution, but temporary buy let's you test alternative within each *run* while some thing, like affinities are never a wrong purchase. Keeping points only for reactionnary actions might be bad if you can't reset. When death is not on the permanent menu, who care?
mathieu brassard
2024-06-07 13:58:13 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter! Why would a prince be raised as a sacrificial lamb by secret service guards? Seems sinister
Epeen
2024-06-07 13:22:52 +0000 UTCwas there a general boost he could buy for Qi manipulation, like spending 10-100mill on a talent for general Qi manipulation seems like it would be worth it in the long run
STORRM
2024-06-07 13:18:00 +0000 UTCi was expecting one of the first thing he would do at the start of the loop to be a boost to all his base affinity's as he has shown how all of them are useful in one way or another, then i expected him to unlock a bunch more.
STORRM
2024-06-07 13:14:40 +0000 UTCI, as Fang, have begun to find the idea of buying things before they are needed to be somewhat questionable. It would make sense to raise it to Peak 6 here, it still only costs a fraction of his credit total, but he simply doesn't need it. All he needs at the moment is Peak 7, so that's all he bought. Let's him keep credits in the bank in case of other eventualities. This isn't a hard rule going forward, just where my, and by extension Fang's, mind is at the moment.
Greg Tolley
2024-06-07 12:59:59 +0000 UTCOnly peak 7 star? There is no reason to argue that he needs it for a specific technique later. That level is pretty much just the basic level it made sense to send all his 5 main affinities to. If it was for focus later, I would have expected him to push to peak 6 star instead, as that is still very much within what is reasonable for him to buy, but also pretty much up there in how good he can reasonly buy permanently.
Ninetails
2024-06-07 12:49:28 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Interesting... I'm sure some of the stronger subordinates will notice the prince's progress is at odds with what it was before... And it shouldn't take TOO long for someone to figure out what factor changed the situation. This begs the question how the more powerful members of the royal family are going to react to Fangs newly shown capabilities...
Gopard
2024-06-07 12:19:55 +0000 UTCVery interesting, I am 90% sure whoever leads this place knows what's happening. I doubt they care much though. Though I have been wondering for a while how do good teachers teach their decsiples in this world, we have not see this before? Do they help in the meridian and wanting construction ensuring less flaws? Do they leave their disciples to do it alone?
Ahmad Azem
2024-06-07 12:19:21 +0000 UTC