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Morning Brew (WIP) NEW ORIGINAL SONG PREVIEW

First time ever mixing a song and making lyrics into a melody. Tell me your thoughts on it! 

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Great early version, mixing is off but the core idea is really cool.

Skynet

Very catchy song. Will probably be humming it all day.

Helsang

I agree on volume balance. For me vocals jump back and forth in being a bit quite or a bit loud, comparing to instrumental or vocals themselves a second ago. But other than that, it's an amazing job, especially considering that it's your first time mixing AND making lyrics AND you still develop your singing (and surely it becomes better and better). Rhythm of the song is very catchy, it easily gets stuck in my head, and lyrics are great

Hoco_kun

it is very nice and relaxing and the paragraph of just talking is really good as well lol the only thing i worry about a bit for this song is the balance between the vocals and the instrumental. Of course the instrumental needs to be present but at some points it almost feels like the instrumental parts are a bit louder than the vocal parts kind of covering them. Though this could be just the volume distortion with patreon but that is the only thing for the song that worries me a bit. but i think for your first time of making lyrics into the melody it is really really good

Melody Rose


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