Devlog 8/13/24 💻✨
Added 2024-08-13 15:24:28 +0000 UTCHOLY CRAP. What the heck, life has been kind of wild lately. UHM, I did not even realize it's been so long since I had time to work on the game. I am so sorry but life is a gift that keeps on giving and giving, and sometimes it gives a lot, you know, like you can't even hold all the things and sometimes not all the things are good. But anyway.
New Addition 1: Worked on sex scene art
I did some initial sketches for part of the (optional) sex scene...
Don't mind THAT-
Then went in and drew the background, lineart, and added color:
Okay, now, I have a question for people who have a good eye when it comes to perspective: why does the background look weird? Like... I think the bathtub looks fine, but the sink and cabinet look off. Maybe the sink is too high? 🧐
New Addition 2: New outfit
And, because the player is given an outfit to wear this chapter, I also drew that :3 It's just a basic purple shirt though, haha. I think I need to read some fashion magazines or something because all my characters dress kinda basic because I have no knowledge about fashion.
Okay, it is so hot where I live, I feel like a sentient puddle of sweat at this point (this is not meant to be horny in the way cute women on Twitter mean it; I am actually suffering).
Hope ya'll have a great rest of your week! 🌈
This week's Todos:
Draw other part of sex scene, start animating sex scene
In a few weeks (?):
Upload chapter 6 to Itch.io
Comments
I don't miss California 95-110 summers. Come to the east coast lol, much better weather.
The Great Kipper
2024-08-14 07:47:52 +0000 UTCI can't wait!
Jace
2024-08-14 01:15:54 +0000 UTCThe angle of the non-vertical edges of the sink make it feel like the corner between the bathtub and the sink isn’t 90°. I’d try compressing the sink horizontally as if we were looking at it more side on. I don’t mean to be a dick assuming you don’t already know this, but have you heard of the disappearing point? A quick look at single disappearing point perspective might be insightful as to the way horizontal angles change slightly depending on their height in the scene Edit: in the end you might have to bring the bathtub and corner to the right of the frame more so you can make the right wall a sharper (more vertical) angle without creating a bunch of empty space on the right of the sink (I think it would happen if you just brought the sink in to compensate)
KahSoT
2024-08-13 23:30:32 +0000 UTCYeah, tightening up the angle on the sink would definitely help.
Caliburn
2024-08-13 17:35:18 +0000 UTCThe bathroom looks kinda like the two walls form an obtuse angle rather than a right angle? That's all I can think of.
Agender Witchery
2024-08-13 16:40:52 +0000 UTCI think the way the sink is leaning and the way the lovers are positioned is slightly off. If they’re standing up straight, then the sink is slanted off to the side in the actual room. But I’m not an artist so take this with a lotta salt. The rest of it looks great and I’m excited!
Fin Walling
2024-08-13 15:37:53 +0000 UTCIt’s only been a bit over two weeks since the last update, which is like no time at all with a lot of stuff you’ve made! So please don’t sweat having more time between updates to this :3! That’s just life
Hexadecimal
2024-08-13 15:36:58 +0000 UTCI'm not able to see that much into the sink from that distance, but I'm also short!
Olivia Tsistinas
2024-08-13 15:26:59 +0000 UTC
