Tides from the Deep - Chapters 11-20
Added 2024-09-14 09:49:24 +0000 UTCChapter 11 – Villagers
Comments
+was enjoyable, junk food easy read -interactions seem weird, sometimes showing should be better than telling, somehow body language are often tell and not shown, this includes MC unnatural speech. -The “monster”, hero complex and need for recognition really GRATING me -MC mentality seem to be about 12-14, definitely not 16 -everything just seems to fall into lot for her with next to no prelude, or predictable ones +-overall enjoyable but I will definitely try to see some char development and might read a few more chapters
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2024-09-21 04:16:42 +0000 UTC
