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A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17

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A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17 A Polycule of Mars pages 16&17

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Love that they are just casually having a conversation while Sarah is suspended, naked, with a probe inside her.

Sarah Cheong: - Mission goes horribly wrong - Crash lands on Mars - Colleagues unconscious - Realizes aliens are real - Realizes aliens are on Mars, despite no prior evidence - Immediately has sex with the aliens What a gigachadette.

AyuVince

Amazing

Paqs

That’s fair, it isn’t the clearest sequence. I ultimately decided that it wasn’t super important that it be clear whose is whose but rather that they’re all squeezed in greeting. But Kayydotts has it right. Kirsheen is on the left and Jhailee on the right. Jhailee is the one with wider hips. 😉

Garth Graham

Left butt is Kisheen, right butt is Jhailee. You can tell by their clothing. Kisheen has a belt on while Jhailee has a wrap type thing

Kayydotts

I'm having a little trouble tracking who's but is getting squeezed in panel 3 & 5 is it Jhailee & Kisheen or different cheeks of either? On the next page it seems only Jhailee is within arm's reach

PixelThis

... or a little awesome!

Jadelantern

Ha. Could be, but alas it’s a typo. Thank you for finding it!

Garth Graham

LOVE the lighting on Page 16! Especially the first and final panels. Also really great colouration on the spit. Also very much a fan of the cultural naming conventions being put to use. One note, not sure if it's intentional, Page 17 Panel 3 Kirsheen says 'orginal' when I think it should be 'original'. Though, considering the context, an orginal thesis COULD be intended?

BreaktheBar


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