SamuZai
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Carrot and Stick?

Hi!

Just wanted to know what people think of Carrot and Stick so far?

I'm having fun with it (Obviously) but I'm genuinely curious to see what everyone else thinks! I've gotten some fantastic feedback, and lots of good ideas on the discord, but I could always use more <3

There's art on the way as well, but it's not done yet!

Comments

I think it's pretty good so far. It very much feels like Carrot is a reused character though. I think underestimated cute girl is a well worn niche for you. In things not related to the story, I'm starting to think that nothing you write will ever end. I would love to have satisfying conclusions to something by now but you just keep starting new stories. Ive started to just sort of look at them like webcomics, not actual books.

traxx

I'm enjoying it, and I like the dual perspectives.

Charles k

another one of yours I enjoy

Dennis


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