Alpha Luna Ch5 Page 11HD
Added 2015-02-23 19:41:32 +0000 UTCDownload the HD version attached to this post. (Includes Spanish and English versions) Comment on the progress of the story here! :D - Feedback is encouraged :), grammar issues, anything since you're the first people to see this page.
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Gracias a tí por ser un Patrón aquí! :D - No estaba seguro si gente de habla hispana iba a usar esta galeria, por eso todos los pos son en Inglés, de todas formas bienvenido y gracias de nuevo! Te los firmaré sin falta.
Leonardo Vidal
2015-02-27 16:55:19 +0000 UTC:O Rayos, ¡no lo veía venir! Felicidades por tu comic leo, te sigo desde hace años y me encanta. Ya quiero comprar el tomo 2 cuando salgo y a ver si me lo firmas junto al tomo 1 primera edición :D
Morthrandor
2015-02-27 03:35:03 +0000 UTCI think it still has the same affect no matter which way you word it. Either way, wonderfully done Leo.
Cynfall
2015-02-24 01:18:42 +0000 UTCThanks! The original line in the second frame was "For the young ones" but I wasn't sure if it was a bit weird considering he reffers to Collie.
Leonardo Vidal
2015-02-24 00:22:06 +0000 UTCNothing wrong with the grammar or structure that I noticed. As for the story....this guy needs to die a painful way >(
Cynfall
2015-02-23 23:59:52 +0000 UTC
