Chapter 55: Threshold
Added 2016-06-26 22:32:49 +0000 UTChttps://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/55/Mother-of-Learning
Chapter 55 is done and posted on fictionpress. Thank you all for patience.
There is still no worldbuilding, because I had been having a lot of trouble with this chapter and the story takes priority. That said, it's not like I didn't work on it at all and I intend to post some worldbuilding soon. I'll make a patreon post to notify you all when I do so.
Enjoy.
Comments
What it is?
JDG
2016-06-26 23:21:00 +0000 UTCI just realized, they might be able to both exit on moral grounds at the end. Zorian is not a copy. He is a copy spliced with the soul of Zach from outside the loop. If the loop guardian were to remove either of their souls then it would be murder, not done by the controller, but by the loop mechanism itself, which the guardian seems to want to avoid. It would be the same issue as if someone were to get pregnant during the loop, then used the black box to give birth before the loop ends, said soul would no longer count as a mildly divergent copy, it would be something completely new
Daniel I Beer
2016-06-26 23:17:18 +0000 UTCJust in time to distract me from writing my own web serial :P
ClearMadness
2016-06-26 23:16:12 +0000 UTCI'm also astounded that the souls of millions are being destroyed on a monthly basis. Not only because it's murder (the original souls are still there), but because apparently souls can be destroyed.
JDG
2016-06-26 23:14:41 +0000 UTCAhh, laughing my head off.
JDG
2016-06-26 23:10:54 +0000 UTCMan I love this story so much. Also hahahahahaha Xvim never fails to entertain. Really happy that like 90% of the questions I asked in the previous chapter were answered. Still reading this story is like finding a puddle in the desert. You rejoice, drink it then sadly look at the empty puddle and cry because you have to go find more.
Daniel I Beer
2016-06-26 23:05:14 +0000 UTCShit just got real. MoL is out. Me and my friends will be in Cyoria until further notice.
JDG
2016-06-26 22:34:36 +0000 UTC
