Chapter 83: Scorpion
Added 2018-04-09 01:24:42 +0000 UTChttps://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/83/Mother-of-Learning
Here it is, the new chapter is finally here! Sorry for the long wait, but at least it is a little longer than usual. Enjoy!
Comments
People at Domagoj’s work: Why is he so tired every third Monday . . . ?
JDG
2018-04-29 20:43:13 +0000 UTCI've got the same feeling
Bruno Salque
2018-04-25 12:04:36 +0000 UTCSo I got home and though: "Man, it's Friday.. can it be.. that on Sunday..." And then I checked the date :( Please don't announce another delay..
Roman
2018-04-20 22:13:29 +0000 UTCAdded to the editing list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2018-04-10 17:06:45 +0000 UTCAdded to the editing list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2018-04-10 17:04:13 +0000 UTCI think the number one benefit of having the crown is denying QI the crown. He's way too dangerous even without it, but having it gives him like 10x the amount of mana.
J H
2018-04-10 14:41:19 +0000 UTCThanks a lot for the chapter! I think I have spotted two typos: "they were apparently a lot less expensive than their own" <= shouldn't this be "expansive" instead? "the treasury wards were though enough" <= shoudln't that be "thorough" instead?
Adrien Matricon
2018-04-09 20:28:57 +0000 UTCHow valuable would the crown be for Zorian compared to Zack?
Vanathor
2018-04-09 19:08:17 +0000 UTCThe question I now have will QI somehow be linked to the restarts.
Daniel
2018-04-09 15:06:17 +0000 UTCOh man oh man, this chapter was so intense. Was QI unable to sense XAS hiding in the orb? If so, could they bring an small army next time to make taking out QI a little easier?
JDG
2018-04-09 03:48:35 +0000 UTCJesus, what a cliffhanger! Great chapter, as always.
Kristoffer
2018-04-09 02:17:57 +0000 UTCParagraph 12: If you started each restart with the ring on you, like the controller was probably supposed to, then that *was* be a minor issue. As it is, it will take *as* a week at minimum to get ahold of it in each restart, and that's after optimizing things
2018-04-09 02:16:04 +0000 UTCExcellent! Already ready it. Wating for chapter 84. Hurry up and write it already. Ha ha ha...
2018-04-09 02:12:42 +0000 UTCExcellent chapter, thank you.
Daniel I Beer
2018-04-09 01:47:49 +0000 UTC
