Chapter 87: Agents of the Crown
Added 2018-07-16 00:07:00 +0000 UTChttps://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/87/Mother-of-Learning
I apologize for the lateness. Still, the new chapter is here! I hope you enjoy it.
Still no worldbuilding post, but I have indeed begun to edit the typos and such in previous chapters. Only two chapters have actually been updated so far, but I have actually done much more than that. I will continue with that, and will hopefully have the entire editing document cleared by next chapter.
Also, I have received a new fanart! You can see it here. It's a drawing of Quatach-Ichl by reddit user u/petrichorE6.
Comments
Also found these typos "he almost lose his balance ". I think this should be "he almost lost his balance". "said Zach, laboriously rising to his feel while using" - I think this should be feet "a desert native that has hear about strange toads" - heard "simple physical enhancements that aims to improve the user's strength" - should be aim in the singular "organized and executed was enough to give other pause" - should be "to give others pause "who were immediately consumed by intense desire to" - "who were immediately consumed by an intense desire to" "and it might give then an answer about how Quatach-Ichl" - "them and answer" "Zach said bluntly, cutting him of." - "cutting him off"
Dark Prophet
2018-07-18 12:15:17 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, thanks! Also found this, "patting the hyra gentle on the flank".
2018-07-16 20:04:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I might have found a typo: the chapter says "These people are not being sent here as help" but the rest of the dialogue says that they are
Adrien Matricon
2018-07-16 11:36:48 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Loved reading it.
Dark Prophet
2018-07-16 03:36:15 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Andrew
2018-07-16 02:00:41 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter :)
Leaf
2018-07-16 01:02:28 +0000 UTC
