Chapter 96: Contract
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https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21220/mother-of-learning/chapter/335040/96-contract
I'm a little late (as usual), but the new chapter is finally here! And I didn't delay it by a week, either! This chapter has some long awaited reveals; I hope they sound as sensible to my readers as they did to me.
Enjoy.
Comments
Thanks. Added to the list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2019-03-09 23:53:09 +0000 UTCReporting a typo: "So if I never find out that you had your memory read or never see your attacker" => if [you] never
Adrien Matricon
2019-03-08 21:12:11 +0000 UTCHe is mentioned in chapter 16.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2019-02-22 10:48:08 +0000 UTCWho the heck is Oganj??
Grond (James)
2019-02-22 03:31:19 +0000 UTCMy question is this: Zorian read Jornak's mind several times and yet found no connection to the Cult. And yet Jornak says, "I was never seriously loyal to [the cult], even before the time loop," suggesting Jornak was part of the Cult. I'm completely shocked Zorian not pick up on it . . .
JDG
2019-02-19 04:37:06 +0000 UTCCorrections added to the editing list. I'll tackle them when I find the time (and after I collect enough of them from various sites).
Domagoj Kurmaic
2019-02-18 23:33:20 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter
Corwin Amber
2019-02-18 22:20:21 +0000 UTC'As Red Robe had noted in his brief letting to them' letting should be letter?
Corwin Amber
2019-02-18 22:20:17 +0000 UTC'allowing him to live him life freely from that' sentence needs correction
Corwin Amber
2019-02-18 22:19:49 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Andrew
2019-02-18 16:12:30 +0000 UTCTypo/error: "Plus, if Zach was compelled to go to a rampage or something" / should be go ON a rampage ""If Zorian began the month in Cyoria, would be also be a candidate?" Zach asked." / should be: would he also be "mister Kazinski here saw though it immediately" should be through Great chapter!
2019-02-18 05:56:15 +0000 UTCDefinitely sensible. Bit confused why Zorian was so certain, but the identity itself is not coming out of nowhere. I like how every character and even non-present characters show themselves to be actual characters instead of caricatures. Angels are annoying sure, but they have a goal and are willing to be reasonable about accomplishing it.
Daniel I Beer
2019-02-18 04:44:58 +0000 UTCAh, forgot to mention in the last comment, perhaps the description of the angel's appearance was a little unclear? I think it doesn't matter so much with human characters, but being some strange unknown, the description of its crosses and positioning of boughs had me re-read it a couple times.
Matthew M
2019-02-18 03:36:58 +0000 UTCLove it; error in the angel's speech. "On the contrary," the angel disagreed. "You were thebest choice. That is why we settled on you in the end."
Matthew M
2019-02-18 03:04:24 +0000 UTC
