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Rewrite the Stars IV || Page 33

Lynn brings up her counterpoints.

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Yeah, love is a door that should swing both ways. Both sides protect, trust, and support each other. Lynn, you’re telling us that it’s okay for you to throw away your future for Lincoln but it’s not okay for him to do the same for you? It’s okay for you to make the decision you want but not him?

Paul Hoon

I love how much more comfortable they are talking about it compared to Part 3. Just that little small measurable growth.

Kevin

I have that feeling in the back of my mind, too, Willy, that this heart-to-heart might not turn out the way we hope. For one, there are still 10 pages of this volume left, enough time for drama to still unfold. And for another, the lyrics to "Rewrite the Stars" don't exactly end on a positive note.

I.O. Penner

All valid arguments on Lynn’s behalf, but yet I find it a little ironic when Lynn says that she’s willing to risk everything to be with Lincoln, but won’t do it because of Lincoln’s future. So, let me try to understand this: Lynn is the one that just sacrificed her chance to train and play with the L.A. Galaxy and yet, she doesn’t want Lincoln to throw away his future for her sake? That’s not a fair argument. You can’t be that stubborn, Lynn: who are you trying to kid? How about we let Lincoln decide how he wants his future to unfold? Because I’m pretty sure after he just poured his heart out like that, the only future he wants is one that has Lynn in it. Also, when Lynn says she wanted nothing more than to finish what they started last year – that brought the biggest smile to my face and, admittedly, I let my mind explore those endless possibilities.

I.O. Penner

Same background from the previous chapter 👀 it’s gonna shatter again?

Jack

Genuinely think Lucy is watching them

Jack

Let's hope it doesn't. Hope for the best, prepare for the worst.

Paul Hoon

Why do I have a feeling this might go south a bit?

Willy Asaka

And your willing to cross that line

Thuren Miller

Isn’t it worth the risk? Didn’t you say you say don’t be afraid to go after an impossible love?

Paul Hoon

Lynn, stop holding back already! 😂

Hootsifer


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