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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 09

Lincoln and Lynn make the most out of their time together.

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We all have our awakenings lol My goal is always to try and make this story enjoyable not just as an incest story, but also a tragic romance (without losing on the wholesome and romantic elements as you mentioned, heh).

UnderratedHero

Oh my God, this is just too romantic and wholesome! 💞 I wasn't very keen on incest relationships when I was younger, but thanks to anime and GF pinecest, I absolutely have no problem with it. XD

CipherRage0909

I LOVED ;-;

Gluttony Pride

I think you might have meant Dani. But the thought of Dani stumbling onto Lincoln and Lynn together as a couple has run through my mind a few times, as well. Some of those instances, she was happy for him, albeit a little put off. And others, she was upset and angry with him. But if Hero plots it out that way, it will be interesting to see how Dani takes the news - her reaction could go either way, as far as I'm concerned.

I.O. Penner

Oh wait, does Lincoln's old girlfriend Dana catch them?

Paul Hoon

SO DARN ROMANTIC! AGHHHHHH! Please don’t let it end in tragedy! 🥺🤍

Spawn

I didn't even know what Tim Horton was until some of you asked for it in the previous post! My favorite panel is the first one, where they walk over a small bridge, but the karaoke one is a high contender. I struggled to pick up a song, but I think that one not only reflects their experiences, but it's also such an iconic song for couples that it feels like a milestone for them. All couples do it at some point, and they want to live it themselves. Thank you, as always, for the kind words and the encouragement!

UnderratedHero

Nothing like a good old throwback :')

UnderratedHero

It’s a breath of fresh air to see Lincoln and Lynn go on a proper date. Even if they had to go to Canada and accomplish that feat, it’s still wonderful to see them act like a couple and do couple activities without fear of discovery. I will say, though, I never knew Tim Horton’s was actually based in Canada. I knew we had a couple of those places in the States, but imagine my surprise of that particular chain’s origins. So, I learned something today, in that regard. Who said comics can’t be informational or educational? One of my favorite panels was Lincoln and Lynn doing karaoke together, singing along to “A Whole New World”. It felt so significant, symbolic even. Although they’ve been an un/official couple for a year, this new dynamic in their relationship is still uncharted territory – a whole new world, you could say. And what better song to emphasize that learning process for both of these lovebirds than that iconic Disney duet? And besides, any instance of Lincoln and Lynn indulging on repressed feelings is always a plus in my book! But perhaps my favorite panel was Lincoln and Lynn at the hockey game, sharing another sweater and a kiss. What better memory for Lincoln and Lynn to recreate than the one that helped them realize their true feelings for each other? I got such a case of the “aww’s” over that scene being redone! Lincoln and Lynn deserve so much happiness together. It’s not their fault they caught feelings for each other; it just happened. And really, who is anyone to judge them over something beyond their control? They’re already happier than most normal couples are. I just love how you’re portraying this entire saga, Hero. All your work is so detailed, flows smoothly and feels so authentic. The way you pour your heart and soul into this story just shows so beautifully. Are you sure you’re not a long-lost animator that used to work on “The Loud House”?

I.O. Penner

AWWW the sweater again, I can't. that is too precious.

Kevin

I love this love story!!, and I still suspect that Lori and Lucy know about them or will be the first to discover it

Matty González

Oh don’t worry, I am. Some of these moments are so precious. I’m trying to figure out what would be said in certain panels, like the one where they are playing pool. What flirty words would Lynn say to Lincoln?

Paul Hoon

I could tell.

Happychap2628

You're welcome. You're doing good. Just got home from doctor appointment. Going to try to get some rest. Been up all night

C.E. Zim93

Let's just enjoy the present lol

UnderratedHero

Thank you!

UnderratedHero

Thank you! I'm glad you like this page, I poured my heart and soul into it lol

UnderratedHero

Maybe after their date

Thuren Miller

This is so cute! Although, I'm nervous because you mentioned that the heavy stuff is around the corner.

Paul Hoon

Glad I woke up. This really good!

C.E. Zim93

Just woke up to see that I had a notification and boy oh boy this has made my morning. You should be proud of what you've done here my friend.

Happychap2628

Muchas gracias! Tratando de darle al mundo el Lynncoln que se merece.

UnderratedHero

Esto es hermoso... Bueno ya tengo foto pa Twitter y tiene que ver con el último panel, que gran trabajo estar haciendo Underratedhero.

Aztrux

And UniformTrain3. Hope you and UniformTrains 1 and 2 have pleasant Lynncoln dreams.

UnderratedHero

Sweet dreams, Xay.

UnderratedHero

Bro same-

Uni

Just as I was going to bed lol

Xay


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