Rewrite the Stars V || Page 22
Added 2024-09-20 15:58:23 +0000 UTCThings are getting out of hand.
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I'm way late saying this, but I think it's especially nice how they defended each other and not themselves.
Muze Clark
2025-03-08 04:18:31 +0000 UTCAgreed
Mark John Banzon
2025-01-29 16:53:11 +0000 UTCIt's honestly not what they think it is. Lincoln and Lynn would never do anything to hurt each other like that.
CipherRage0909
2024-10-14 03:41:09 +0000 UTCI think the way they got caught is stupid like really? They were kissing on the street and also they could lie and say that that officer was wrong and get out of the problem I hope they will not be separated because I wanted to see se x between them in their resent bodies
Айхан Гасанов
2024-09-23 17:01:53 +0000 UTCOn the previous page, in the panel where Lynn buried her face in her hands and Lincoln was hugging himself, it made me think of them bracing for impact once their parents put two and two together. And what an unexpected turn that took! I could just see the gears in Rita’s head turning and turning. And while she may have the some of the pieces, the puzzle she has constructed in her mind paints a completely different picture. At first read, it was quite a shock to see her come to that conclusion. But upon further introspection, I can’t say I blame Rita for making that kind of assumption. This relationship between Lincoln and Lynn has been going on under her and her husband’s noses for over a year – and neither of them noticed. In Rita’s mind, I’m sure she thinks she and Lynn Sr. both failed in their duties as parents. So of course, maternal instinct is going to presume the worst-case scenario and try its damndest to rectify the situation. Unfortunately, I feel once Lincoln and Lynn clear the air and explain that their romantic relationship is not a prank and is indeed real, it’s still not going to offer any kind of comfort to Rita or Lynn Sr. And that is when maternal instinct will turn into drastic measure – something that will only further expand the blast radius of this bombshell and alter the family that much more.
I.O. Penner
2024-09-22 05:54:41 +0000 UTCThe idea is that one of them (Lynn/Lincoln) might be abusing the other. Either by grooming, threatening, or something else. Which is what 99% would assume is going on if two teen siblings are making out in public. That, or a prank of some sorts.
UnderratedHero
2024-09-22 00:00:08 +0000 UTCAlthough, if it was yes, then who would be abusing them? The sisters? A coach or teacher? Who?
Paul Hoon
2024-09-21 22:41:38 +0000 UTCTbh, Rita’s question isn’t really out of left field. It’s a fair question.
Jack
2024-09-21 19:19:13 +0000 UTCI hate to say this you too, but I think it's time to tell them the truth. Bottling up your feelings is not healthy
Thuren Miller
2024-09-21 02:18:31 +0000 UTCWe're all dying to know what happens next and when it'll get good again. We know you can't rush these things, but the suspense! Dang 😰
Paul Hoon
2024-09-21 01:01:44 +0000 UTCYou're doing a great job on the story. Very interesting. Can't wait for more
C.E. Zim93
2024-09-21 00:54:06 +0000 UTCIncredibly uncomfortable! As a writer I try to myself in their shoes and oh boy, can't imagine what would go in my mind in that situation!
UnderratedHero
2024-09-20 23:30:32 +0000 UTCOh my lord. Rita is putting the pieces together. Definitely uncomfortable for everyone
C.E. Zim93
2024-09-20 22:54:25 +0000 UTCThey will; they're still their kids and they love them.
UnderratedHero
2024-09-20 19:56:00 +0000 UTCA fair question. Though I'm surprised they didn't pull them into a separate room to ask that. Not that it would have made a difference in the answer.
Kevin
2024-09-20 17:26:15 +0000 UTCWould be nice if Lisa created a new version of her memory eraser device so she can save Lincoln and Lynn from their big trouble. Simply erase Lynn Sr and Rita's memory of the past hours and boom problem solved. Lisa also might erase that canada guard's memory too.
Blazzore
2024-09-20 17:01:17 +0000 UTCWell I guess so 😕😕
Double Gron
2024-09-20 16:58:02 +0000 UTCNow I’m wondering will Rita and Lynn Sr listen to anything that they say?
Paul Hoon
2024-09-20 16:57:19 +0000 UTCI expected Rita to say something resalable thank that.
Happychap2628
2024-09-20 16:50:22 +0000 UTCAbused? Well, that depends on your definition Rita.
Paul Hoon
2024-09-20 16:48:53 +0000 UTCMy thoughts exactly.
Happychap2628
2024-09-20 16:46:22 +0000 UTCExacto, sólo está preocupada de que haya algo serio de lo que no se percató.
UnderratedHero
2024-09-20 16:44:21 +0000 UTCShe's a mother learning that two of her kids were making out in public, they're too afraid to speak, she's terrified that one of them might be a victim of abuse.
UnderratedHero
2024-09-20 16:43:57 +0000 UTCTodas respuestas que se resolverán en la siguiente página!
UnderratedHero
2024-09-20 16:43:15 +0000 UTCUna muy interesante página. En mi opinión yo lo llamaría: Aclaraciones para evitar problemas, no sé si ya viene la confesión y quién será el que lo diga? Lisa estara espiando la conversación?
El Pinche Barry
2024-09-20 16:29:20 +0000 UTCJesus Rita why would you jump to abuse?
Corey Peters
2024-09-20 16:17:58 +0000 UTCEsto se pone más intenso y Rita pensando otras cosas ;bueno creo que es instinto de madre
Juan Carlos Juarez
2024-09-20 16:11:23 +0000 UTC😔😣
Thuren Miller
2024-09-20 16:07:22 +0000 UTC😔
Mia Roman
2024-09-20 16:02:42 +0000 UTC
