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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 24

They knew this moment was coming. 

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Sad but the truth hurts if they do that they will abandoned they're loves ones, friends and, family also others. ☹️

Mark John Banzon

10/10 pero como no tengo plata para las demás quedará esperar

Zanpa Kuto

I think Lincoln and Lynn are probably going to run away together. It's the only way for them to be happy.

CipherRage0909

They love them but can't just accept the fact that their son and daughter are in a romantic relationship. They're going to send them to extreme therapy sessions and keep them separated.

CipherRage0909

Lynn and Rita could send either one of them to live with their Aunt Ruth, or Camp Mastodon so they're kept apart.

Hootsifer

I just hope that Rita and Lynn can tell those two why they can’t love each other like a regular couple. I think they’re taking their sibling connection they have and trying to force it into a boyfriend girlfriend thing.

Double Gron

That's why I'm hoping you won't do that. If the Loud family in here is anything like in the show, there'll be some way they'll still love each other and not lead to anything like disowning them. There'll be some kind of happy ending, we know that, but we're wondering is it going to be a bittersweet ending.

Paul Hoon

That sounds really harsh lol

UnderratedHero

If I had to make an educated guess, worst case scenario: Lola will spit in Lincoln and Lynn's faces. Lana won't bear to look at them. Luan will say something like, "You two disgust me." Lily won't understand. Lisa won't be able to make sense of it even with her big brain. Lucy will be the only one who will talk to them and accept them as family. Best case scenario: They somehow understand and accept them. Only time and UnderratedHero will tell and show us what the outcome will be.

Paul Hoon

Yeah me too

Double Gron

Speaking of everyone else, I’m almost afraid of what the other sisters reactions are going to be.

Paul Hoon

In the end, they all love each other, they're family. The parents still love their children, and they obviously care about their parent's approval. It'll be tough, there's a lot to figure out, but they all want the best for the family.

UnderratedHero

La noche es más oscura justo antes del amanecer... o algo así dicen, veremos si se cumple en este caso.

UnderratedHero

Hard pill to swallow

UnderratedHero

It's self-centered in the sense that it's hard for everyone else, but I think fighting for what you love is the good kind of self-centeredness lol

UnderratedHero

I appreciate the measured response from Rita, I mean its probably denial more than anything but its still very kind. An good on the 2 of them for standing up for what they have. I know things are probably about to go south real fast but I still find both sides of this discussion sweet in their own way.

Kevin

Cada vez se torna mas oscuro 😖

José Ángel Romero Rosales

Rita and Lynn Sr, pale as ghost after hearing the truth

Thuren Miller

If it's real for them then I support them. Lots of different couples have been in this situation. I wish Lincoln and Lynn Jr the best. Hope Lynn Sr and Rita supports and understand them.

C.E. Zim93

Those two are starting to be self-centered right now 🙁🙁😣.

Double Gron

I doubt there's a lot of room to go even further down, so I suppose up is the only way to go from here lol And this isn't any Sin Kids AU, it's the Rewrite the Stars AU. No other relationships between Lincoln and other characters.

UnderratedHero

Es un montón para recibir de repente. Necesitan tiempo para procesarlo.

UnderratedHero

jajajajaja te lo aceptaría con gusto

UnderratedHero

We'll find out soon enough!

UnderratedHero

While they didn't expect a confrontation to come so soon, and it blindsided them to get to this point through a stupid mistake, they've both been rehearsing this scenario in their heads for so long. They don't have a script, but they know what their parents (or anyone else) might think, so they're trying to counter any objection preemptively. "It's real, we know it. We tried to ignore it, but it didn't work. We love each other like you do. Yes, it's weird, but it's still real. No, this doesn't have to change anything." Emotions are brewing on both sides tho, so no one knows what will happen next.

UnderratedHero

They're both terrified, but her big sister instinct is still there.

UnderratedHero

Like she said, it's not your typical kind of love, but it's real. They *know* it's real. And that's worth fighting for.

UnderratedHero

Yup, they've tried to get over it and it didn't work, so now they can only fight for what they have.

UnderratedHero

It'd be a natural thing for them to do.

UnderratedHero

Lynn already gave up her dream for him. They're madly in love, they're willing to do whatever it takes to stay together.

UnderratedHero

You’d be surprised what distance some people will go for the ones they love. Sometimes life is about what’s worth hanging on to and what you have to let go.

Paul Hoon

I guess it is a Sin Kids AU since Lacy will eventually be born.

Mia Roman

Yeah I agree.

Double Gron

Maybe you’re right because this has gone on long enough 🙁🙁. So I agree with your thought.

Double Gron

They’re saying that if they’re willing to give up everything for each other, it’s like they’re saying they would dump their own family to. That is just cut and dry, why would they do this? 🥺😥😥

Double Gron

I think the parents are going to send Lincoln and Lynn to therapy. They won’t accept their incest relationship.

Blazzore

One thing to know about Rita and Lynn Sr is they're not always the best listeners or the brightest bulbs. I'm not trying to be mean to the parents, but it's the truth.

Paul Hoon

This is heartbreaking and gut wrenching. They’re being honest about themselves and they know it’s wrong but they don’t care. They love each other.

Paul Hoon

This breaks my heart 💔. Lynn and Lincoln really love each other like any couple would. They couldn't hide their feelings or deny it. And both are in tears 😭 I wonder what's going to happen next.

C.E. Zim93

Lincoln and Lynn are determined to fight for their love, it is so adorable Lynn comforting poor Lincoln, while he's putting on a brave face. Rita, unable to comprehend their love is priceless.

Happychap2628

It’s almost laughable at this point to see Rita try to fool herself into thinking that this is all still just a big misunderstanding. But at this point, honesty really is the best policy for Lincoln and Lynn to take. It was so heart-wrenching to see Lincoln and Lynn pour their hearts out, chronicling how they both tried so hard to remain siblings, but failed in the end. The struggle in their hearts was real; the tension was thick and unbearable; the misery was complete and utter agony. I just felt sad when Lynn tried to reason that her and Lincoln’s romantic relationship didn’t have to change anything – it’s almost defeating to see how wrong she will be. Because honestly, a small part of me wanted so bad to hope that Rita and Lynn Sr. would be convinced by their children’s honest approach. But deep down, I know the storm is still brewing and dark clouds are rearing their ugly heads in. And once the lightning strikes, both sides are going to suffer the fallout. However, I absolutely love the united front Lincoln and Lynn put on in front of their parents. Even though I’m sure they suspect Rita and Lynn Sr. still won’t be on board with this development, it really warms my heart to see how Lincoln and Lynn will not back down or be intimidated. No matter what, they’re prepared to fight for and defend this love of theirs to the end. You just can’t help but admire that kind of commitment and loyalty.

I.O. Penner

All I can think about... Is the Sin Kids AU, but I don't even know anymore.

DarkHammer

Dude, my heart's pounding. What's gonna happen!?

DarkHammer

Ellos estan justificando sus sentimientos tienen el derecho de hacerlo, no sé si habrá más palabras de los dos. Después vendrá la réplica de por parte de sus padres, no sé si alguno de los padres reaccione con cólera por las acciones de sus hijos, tal vez alguno de los padres se autoculpe por haber descuidado a sus dos hijos. Muy buena página estimado Hero. Te invitaría a un asado.

El Pinche Barry

Ambos se confesaron su gran amor que bonito , pero a los padres no les parecen estar bien convencidos

Juan Carlos Juarez

I sense there is no way of this going uphill anytime soon.. or at all 😳

Uni


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