Rewrite the Stars V || Page 27
Added 2024-11-06 15:55:43 +0000 UTCThe conversation takes an unexpected path.
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WOW, mind blown
Darthpyro
2024-11-12 21:11:13 +0000 UTCThey’re almost close of crossing the line. They need to stop now before they say anything they’re going to feel remorseful for ☹️🙁.
Double Gron
2024-11-09 12:55:24 +0000 UTCA hell of a bombshell to drop right there. Especially when you remember their siblings are listening in
Antn100Q
2024-11-09 00:35:36 +0000 UTCYeah, I remember that comic page. That's always been a sign when a girl wants to get frisky with their male partner. Makes me wonder if Lynn went all out on their date. Like if she had light makeup on and put some perfume on herself. Which she probably borrowed from Lola. XD
CipherRage0909
2024-11-08 22:38:38 +0000 UTCI had a feeling. In one of the previous pages, Lynn was biting Lincoln's lip while gliding her fingers through his hair while he was holding her booty. A girl doesn't do that to someone she's not crazy about. She wants to devour him and has. LOL.
Paul Hoon
2024-11-07 21:37:34 +0000 UTCOh, I'm so thrilled to know that Lincoln and Lynn finally consummated their relationship! Hooray! It was definitely a powerful and shocking reveal! And I hope someday, Hero, that you do make a Rewrite the Stars 4.5, detailing Lincoln and Lynn's special night together. I'm sure a good majority of us readers would love to see how it all went down. Ooh, this has been so exciting!
I.O. Penner
2024-11-07 16:29:05 +0000 UTC🤯🤯🤯 Where, when?!
Happychap2628
2024-11-07 16:13:16 +0000 UTCLo descubriremos en el próximo capítulo de Dragon Ball Z
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:45:57 +0000 UTCThey're definitely being selfish.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:45:18 +0000 UTCThey did!
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:44:58 +0000 UTCYeah I guess so, but I somewhat think that there’s no way to get through them, what they did to try and hide this secret relationship wasn’t very noble. They’re almost starting to care about themselves only.
Double Gron
2024-11-07 15:42:27 +0000 UTC😳😱🤯Oh my god! Really? Wow, I thought you were going to dog us and leave it a mystery, but no. They did it! They made love. Their V-cards are gone. Thanks for confirming. Now I’m wondering if you are going to show like a glimpse of it. Like not a full-on sex scene, but like an after-sex scene where they’re laying in bed naked with the blanket covering their lower halves. God the suspense is killing us.
Paul Hoon
2024-11-07 15:42:23 +0000 UTCI can confirm that they indeed went all the way as Rita and Lynn Sr fear. Maybe one day I'll write a Rewrite the Stars 4.5 to show it, I don't know. Two comics at the same time sounds a bit overwhelming! But yeah, I'm glad the plot-twist caught so many people off-guard. I was being sneaky, because I knew most would assume it was just a symbolic element I'd throw in there. It'd make the reveal feel a lot more powerful, in my mind.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:42:18 +0000 UTCIt was worth it! You did well Hero. It's worth every penny and minute. Now I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!😁
C.E. Zim93
2024-11-07 15:42:08 +0000 UTCOk. Entonces crees que el señor Loud se autoculpe por esta situación mientras Rita será que tome acciones? Lucy ya sabía que Lynn amaba a Lincoln?
El Pinche Barry
2024-11-07 15:37:03 +0000 UTCYooo! They really had sex?! 🫢😳 Damn! Teens having sex is no surprise. I guess Lynn and Lincoln couldn't hold themselves back. I just hope that they used protection. 😨
CipherRage0909
2024-11-07 15:31:04 +0000 UTCI've been planning that reveal for months, I'm so happy this page is finally out!
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:29:40 +0000 UTCHave you seen Lincoln trying to lie in the show? They know they can't lie their way out of this, and if they tried, it'd only make things worse.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:22:43 +0000 UTCThey're definitely using protection!
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:20:48 +0000 UTCWhen? Sometime(s) between the end of the last issue and the beginning of this one. How? Taking advantage of the small windows of time when they're alone.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:20:09 +0000 UTCIt's an EXTREMELY awkward situation lol And, well, I don't know about hardcore, but they definitely had some vanilla love-making.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:17:10 +0000 UTCIt was hiding in plain sight, absolutely lol And yes, they did it.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:16:11 +0000 UTCYeah, the parents are still trying to process all this new information, and the kids are still in shock at being caught. No one's in their best mindset to have a conversation as difficult as this one.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:15:40 +0000 UTCI can confirm that Lynn and Lincoln did, in fact, make love between issues IV and V.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:10:52 +0000 UTCEntre los padres? Nah, se aman demasiado, y no le harían eso a la familia. Van a trabajar para superar la situación
UnderratedHero
2024-11-07 15:09:12 +0000 UTCI’m so glad and relieved to see you up and at it again, Hero! It’s been a long month, for sure. And after reading this page, it was absolutely worth the wait! For one, let me just say that I was completely stunned when Lynn Sr. commented on Lincoln and Lynn wearing each other’s clothes. What?! You mean this whole time, that red collared shirt wasn’t Lincoln’s?! And the orange collared shirt wasn’t Lynn’s?! That was a plot twist I never saw coming! I mean, I knew they’ve had those clothes since you showed off the design phase of all the siblings before Volume 5 began. And at first, I thought it was just a slight allusion/shared secret of Lincoln and Lynn’s relationship being official, known only to them. But never in my wildest dreams did I suspect an ulterior motive like that. Wow, Hero! You sure know how to take things to the next level! And perhaps even a bigger shock is that Lincoln and Lynn may have already possibly consummated their relationship! But as much as I’d love to jump to that kind of conclusion, I admit I’m a little unsure of myself. On the one hand, it could be the parents overreacting and assuming the worst. After all, they are still trying to process this bombshell their kids have dropped on them. But on the other hand, Lincoln and Lynn haven’t denied the accusation. Perhaps they have experimented with each other during private moments – you can’t jump into the game without getting a little practice in first, after all. But Lincoln and Lynn being red in the face and teary-eyed does speak volumes about confirmation of them being intimate. So, if there is truth to what Rita and Lynn Sr. fear has happened, we might need to see the depiction of this sequence of events between Lincoln and Lynn. Maybe not the grand finale itself, but at least the building blocks that led up to that magical grand finale. Gosh, my head is in a tizzy! But weirdly enough, Hero – I wouldn’t want it any other way.
I.O. Penner
2024-11-07 06:06:58 +0000 UTCMaybe the question shocked them too much to say no.
Paul Hoon
2024-11-07 00:40:31 +0000 UTCWhat If Lincoln And Lynn Have Sex When The Loud Sisters And The Parents Are Not Home But Lincoln Need To Use Protection On Him Of Opposite Sex With Lynn To Not Get Her Pregnant For First Time Of Sex And Regular Sex When Lynn Is 20 Years Old and Lincoln Is 18 Years Old
Silvester Rodriguez
2024-11-06 23:09:02 +0000 UTCOh my damn!...😱😰 This is really serious. I didn't realize they were each other clothes. Did they?.... Wow what a way to return to the comic.
C.E. Zim93
2024-11-06 19:17:39 +0000 UTCOh man, they didn’t even TRY to say no
Texas Gent
2024-11-06 19:06:33 +0000 UTCMaybe UnderratedHero will surprise us.
Paul Hoon
2024-11-06 18:45:18 +0000 UTC🫣
Mia Roman
2024-11-06 18:07:31 +0000 UTCMy god, I know it’s November but I was NOT expecting this O_O
Uni
2024-11-06 17:29:25 +0000 UTCThe Loud Parents They May Be The Fall And Afraid Of Lynn And Lincoln If They Have Sex And Lynn Gets Pregnant And The Parents Makes 11 Kids Of They Life Turn In To A Nightmare But They Are To Young And I Wish They Are Older And Have Sex Lynn Gets Pregnant And Kids And The Loud Parents Become Grandparents Soon
Silvester Rodriguez
2024-11-06 17:21:28 +0000 UTCO MY GOD?! But when and How that even possible?
Thuren Miller
2024-11-06 17:03:44 +0000 UTCI don't think these two had hardcore sex. (No matter how badly they wanted to. 😐) The loud parents are just overreacting. Though I find it pretty funny with the way that they're acting. They're like those parents who ask their child and their partner if they had sex yet. The only difference is that they're both their children which makes the situation even more awkward. XD
CipherRage0909
2024-11-06 16:50:32 +0000 UTCOH DAME! They slept together, we saw that in page 1, but how did I not see that they swapped shirt?! It was hiding in plain sight. Wait! They didn't do it, did they?! Oh man, I want to see what happens next so badly!
Happychap2628
2024-11-06 16:50:28 +0000 UTCThey're just assuming. Lincoln and Lynn still have their V cards. Maybe they did some harmless foreplay. They're still teenagers after all.
CipherRage0909
2024-11-06 16:42:51 +0000 UTCI don’t think those two understand what they’re saying. It’s like their parentals are feeling a little betrayed, like where did they go wrong 😔.
Double Gron
2024-11-06 16:28:01 +0000 UTCI know your joking but if you did do that then you would raise the funds. Here's a suggestion you could create a new tier on here and say if you get x amount you do extra pages showing sexual stuff.
Corey Peters
2024-11-06 16:24:34 +0000 UTCHuele a divorcio?
El Pinche Barry
2024-11-06 16:22:38 +0000 UTCOk. Solo falta que los padres se empiecen a culpar mutuamente por descuidar a sus hijos sería más limón a la herida.
El Pinche Barry
2024-11-06 16:21:49 +0000 UTCYa veremos las reacciones de las hermanas en el futuro cercano. Faltan algunas páginas todavía.
UnderratedHero
2024-11-06 16:18:16 +0000 UTCThe house has way less people nowadays, a lot less crowded. Also they can go somewhere else... Who knows!
UnderratedHero
2024-11-06 16:17:24 +0000 UTCWait, did they really? Or are the parents just assuming? Because it could be a quirk that they do, like they love each other’s smell or something.
Paul Hoon
2024-11-06 16:16:37 +0000 UTCI should start raising funds for a comic showing how that went lol
UnderratedHero
2024-11-06 16:16:35 +0000 UTCUna página sorprendente honestamente. Ya me imagino la reacción de las hermanas que están escuchando la conversación. Veremos qué va a hacer Rita con esta situación porque el padre está confundido. Creo que Luan debería meter a sus hermanas a sus habitaciones por la plática o habrá una sorpresa. Felicitaciones 🎊
El Pinche Barry
2024-11-06 16:08:18 +0000 UTCDid you forget the house's walls are thin? There is no way Lincoln and Lynn Jr were able to have sex without their family hearing the sounds. Let see the next page if Lincoln did wear a condom or no.
Blazzore
2024-11-06 16:03:01 +0000 UTCAw they had sex. Show us these things please
Corey Peters
2024-11-06 15:59:39 +0000 UTC
