Rewrite the Stars V || Page 47
Added 2025-02-17 05:40:14 +0000 UTCThey made their choice.
I considered making the end of the page a bit more "dramatic", but the visual gag seemed like a good enough way to break the tension... at least a little bit.
Comments
If this was Lola then Lincoln and Lynn Jr wouldn't be able to run away from the house, Luckily they only encounter Lily in the kitchen.
Blazzore
2025-03-18 15:03:25 +0000 UTCI can see a unloaded image at the end, what is it supposed to be?
Moss1998
2025-03-01 10:31:43 +0000 UTCYou and me both, amigo.
David Mullins
2025-02-20 19:44:20 +0000 UTCIndeed ^^
Happychap2628
2025-02-19 15:23:47 +0000 UTCLate teens. I think Lynn is 18, and Lincoln is 16, but I could be wrong.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-19 04:27:14 +0000 UTCHow old are Lincoln and Lynn in this point in the story?
Texas Gent
2025-02-18 12:55:10 +0000 UTCOption 1: *Lynn stares* *Linc stares* *Lily opens her mouth* Lynn: Run! *bolts while holding Linc's hand for dear life* Option 2: *everyone stares* Lily: dad set an alarm on the back door and he keeps the bedroom door cracked. Linc: good looking out. Thanks Lily. Lynn: we'll miss you lilster Lily: just promise you'll be happy and you won't stay a stranger when you get set up. Linc: we'll see in a few years. Goodbye (Accepting criticisms for staying in character)
Muze Clark
2025-02-18 09:07:22 +0000 UTCThis went from sad to awkward . You saw nothing.
Thuren Miller
2025-02-18 05:26:22 +0000 UTCThat’s what we’re all hoping for. I hope there’s an epilogue of them years later middle aged and I’m curious what the letter says and what the family’s reaction is.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-18 01:44:01 +0000 UTCBOLT. DEFINITELY
Dream_ Rat
2025-02-18 01:43:52 +0000 UTCI really hope they truly make a life together. No matter what anyone thinks
Dream_ Rat
2025-02-18 01:40:00 +0000 UTCFUCK YOU CREATOR. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD ROMANCE STORY AND I CAN'T STOP CRYING AND READING. MAKE MORE SOON
Dream_ Rat
2025-02-18 01:34:29 +0000 UTCI wasn’t expecting this either.
Double Gron
2025-02-17 21:50:44 +0000 UTCThey're either gonna have an akward talk, or bolt out the door
SoulTy
2025-02-17 21:49:11 +0000 UTCThey will probably do that when the story is otherwise fineshed
Fabinator
2025-02-17 21:43:01 +0000 UTCI actually have a related question. Back in Chapter 1, the narration bubbles were them in the future reminiscing, so I’ve been curious about when we’d catch up to the narrator’s present. The last page had narration in the present tense—does that mean we’ve finally reached the present from the narrator’s perspective? Or do the narration bubbles not all take place during the same conversation/time? If that makes sense
Kevin
2025-02-17 21:24:04 +0000 UTCOh boy I was not ready for the next page this quick. I always like the idea of them eloping, but man it does suck it was spurred by just how miserable they were at home.
Kevin
2025-02-17 21:17:45 +0000 UTCI am hoping you’ll do an epilogue page, like of them years later when they’re middle aged and living well. I'm also hoping we get to see that letter they wrote their family.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-17 20:51:38 +0000 UTCI wonder where they are going.
Double Gron
2025-02-17 19:44:48 +0000 UTC💯🤣
Mia Roman
2025-02-17 19:40:24 +0000 UTC1. yes. Red is for Lynn, orange is for Lincoln. 2. Up to your interpretation.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 19:19:22 +0000 UTCI'm sorry if I'm bothering but i have 2 questions 1.were the red and orange spech bubles them talking in the attic? 2.Is Lily setting or defuseing the cake trap
Fabinator
2025-02-17 18:44:26 +0000 UTCWell, here’s hoping Lily will find it in her heart to let them go and give them a head start to disappear.
Paul Hoon
2025-02-17 18:43:51 +0000 UTCI
Austin Hicks
2025-02-17 17:55:15 +0000 UTCIt took me a couple of years to decide whether Lily or Lucy would be the one to intercept them as they leave, but I have my reasons to end up with Lily. This won't be pretty, but it's the last test they need to make their decision: are they really willing to say goodbye to the family? Possibly forever?
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:37:08 +0000 UTC:'(
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:26:19 +0000 UTCIt could never be as easy as just walking away, could it?
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:25:58 +0000 UTCThey are, indeed, doing it. Goodbye Loud House.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:24:50 +0000 UTCThank you, it was a funny set up for a pretty sad thing to come lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:24:32 +0000 UTCI don't think she'll eat them lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:24:16 +0000 UTCAt this point, they should try EVERYTHING at their disposal lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:23:36 +0000 UTCIt's a trap. Whoever opens the fridge will get a pie thrown at them.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:22:24 +0000 UTCShe's either setting up a prank for tomorrow, or maybe she got hungry and decided to eat one of Luan's trap pies... I'll leave that up to the reader lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:22:06 +0000 UTCThat's exactly what I wanted lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:21:05 +0000 UTCThe whole point of leaving at night was to avoid this very inconvenient, and now they have to deal with it. I swear to God, they never get a break lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:20:44 +0000 UTCNo será fácil, eso seguro
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 17:17:29 +0000 UTCWhatever
Paul Hoon
2025-02-17 16:50:09 +0000 UTCLily será la hermana que los verá partir? Ya me quiero ver como ellos dos de despiden de ella.
El Pinche Barry
2025-02-17 16:18:29 +0000 UTCThey really didn't know what else to do. This is the only way for them to be happy together without bringing so much grief and depression to their family.
CipherRage0909
2025-02-17 16:14:36 +0000 UTCIf you mean some kind of a spirit then okay lol.
Double Gron
2025-02-17 14:54:30 +0000 UTCI can already hear Sugar Momma from the Proud Family yelling to Lincoln and Lynn: “Lie baby! Lie like the wind!”
Paul Hoon
2025-02-17 14:39:12 +0000 UTCI didn’t think they would make this decision.
Double Gron
2025-02-17 14:10:50 +0000 UTCI..I I can’t believe this. They’ve actually decided to RUN AWAY 😳😱😱😱😱😱😳😳😱😱. And just as things couldn’t get any worse they got detected by Lily and now she’s gonna ask where they are going. This predicament has gone from bad to awful.
Double Gron
2025-02-17 13:55:19 +0000 UTCAt first, I was like “YES!!” but then when I saw Lily I was like “Oh crap.” LOL 😂
Paul Hoon
2025-02-17 10:14:17 +0000 UTCJust checked to be sure: she is 6.
Muze Clark
2025-02-17 08:23:06 +0000 UTCI'm guessing Lily was setting up a prank.
Muze Clark
2025-02-17 08:22:04 +0000 UTCWhat a lil’ scamp Lily is, unless she’s trying to GET the pie and that’s Luan’s trap. Regardless… this is getting very interesting very quickly. ^u^”
Spawn
2025-02-17 08:16:04 +0000 UTCWhat's with the glove/spring?
Hootsifer
2025-02-17 07:52:06 +0000 UTCLily: What... *rubs eyes* Are you guys doing? Lincoln: We're uhhhh... an illuuuusiooooooon- Lily: Lincoln, I'm [whatever age she is now] not three. Lincoln: Well... worth a shot.
J-Leaf
2025-02-17 07:22:17 +0000 UTCHe's got a very good point there, don't you know?
David Mullins
2025-02-17 07:20:02 +0000 UTC( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Huh, a new page for the comic? ( 1 minute later ) Oooooooooooooohhhhhh... ( X30 Excited ) I knew it! 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 I called it! I so called it! Whoo-hoo! 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😆😆😆😆😆 ( X8 ) Duh-duh Can't touch this! ( X8 ) Duh-duh Can't touch this! Man, Lucy and Lisa are right and Boom! Can't wait to see what happens next. Oh, and I hope Lily doesn't rat Lynncoln out. If she does... they're toast... ...And not the yummy cinnamon kind. Right now... Whooooooooooooooooooooooooo-hooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand In Excitement This Time ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )
David Mullins
2025-02-17 07:18:26 +0000 UTC(On a side note) I think what you did with the end of the page was pretty funny. Lilly has learnt a lot from Luan.
Happychap2628
2025-02-17 06:45:48 +0000 UTCOH MY GOD!!!! They're doing it, they're really doing it!
Happychap2628
2025-02-17 06:42:22 +0000 UTCCan't leave without giving the little one a terrible good bye
Jose Hernandez
2025-02-17 06:25:52 +0000 UTCThey Life Need To Start Over & They Put Lily To Bed Or Tell Her Not To Tell The Loud Parents & Sisters Anything & Also They Will Start Saying The Lines Of Lily Listen Your Big Sister & Brother Are Going Away For A Little While Don’t Worry Will Come Back Very Soon We Promise & Lily Saying Please Don’t Go Stay.
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-02-17 06:15:52 +0000 UTCOh, my gosh! I was not expecting another page this soon! But this makes me so happy; the suspense was really killing me. I’m so glad Lincoln and Lynn are choosing to follow their hearts. I’m sure they would’ve liked to have their parents and the rest of their sisters involved in their happy ending, but it was just not in the cards they were dealt. And it’s unfortunate, but as I’ve said in previous comments, this love of theirs is worth fighting for. Lincoln and Lynn will have their happily ever after, one way or the other. I’ll be very curious to see how Lincoln and Lynn say goodbye to their family in their letter. But of course, there had to be that one individual to happen upon them this late at night. I suppose Lily is the better option than some of their other sisters or their parents, though. It’s just one more hurdle for Lincoln and Lynn to leap over before they make their break for freedom. But it’s not going to be an easy one. Now comes the tricky part, because while Lily may not understand the reasons why her older brother and sister fell in love with each other, she will come to understand that this may be the last time she ever sees Lincoln and Lynn in the flesh. And the harsh reality that the Loud House will very soon be a little less loud is surely going to affect them all.
I.O. Penner
2025-02-17 06:12:23 +0000 UTCI was afraid you would say that 😭
C.E. Zim93
2025-02-17 06:12:18 +0000 UTCThey have some plans... We'll get to see them soon
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 06:07:18 +0000 UTCI try to update as soon as I can, but sometimes I don't have all the time I wish I had. But as you can see, sometimes it might take a week, sometimes it takes a day. It depends on how hard the pages are and how much time I can spend on them.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 06:05:39 +0000 UTCGotta keep people wanting more lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 06:04:36 +0000 UTCTravesuras
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 06:04:14 +0000 UTCPobrecita Lily en este tomo jajajaja
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 06:04:10 +0000 UTCDamn back to back cliff hangers *SIGH* I love them but you killing me man lol
TLSM 115
2025-02-17 06:00:31 +0000 UTCWell, let's not underestimate her. But it's a difficult situation for her, for sure...
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:59:50 +0000 UTCBeing homeless is never easy but it will bring at least some sense of adventure for Lynn and Lincoln. I would love to see a montage of them hitchhiking to towns, meeting new people along the way, surviving on fast food, and camping in a later chapter.
CipherRage0909
2025-02-17 05:59:41 +0000 UTCIt was a foregone conclussion. But at least they tried to make it work, until it became evident that it would never work.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:59:31 +0000 UTCOk
Austin Hicks
2025-02-17 05:59:23 +0000 UTCI don't think taking Lily with them is a real option. What kind of life would they be giving their little sister?
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:59:08 +0000 UTCIt's gonna be a bit hard to get her to go to bed right now...
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:56:19 +0000 UTCAsí es tu lo has dicho, un saludo sigue así con el cómic y también con tu vida personal 👍
Juan Carlos Juarez
2025-02-17 05:56:09 +0000 UTCNoted
Muze Clark
2025-02-17 05:56:06 +0000 UTCIn other words don’t get spoiled as it isn’t likely to occur often
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-02-17 05:54:17 +0000 UTCYeah, but that might just make this so much harder.
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:52:44 +0000 UTCRight when I'm going to bed lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:52:27 +0000 UTCEl peor timing de la historia para los noviecitos
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:52:20 +0000 UTCI just had a fun Sunday to spend on the comic lol
UnderratedHero
2025-02-17 05:51:52 +0000 UTCIt might have been the lack of dialogue thus he might have already had it mostly completed
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-02-17 05:50:12 +0000 UTC😯 this was the separation I expected, but I didn't expect it so quickly, or for them to be confronted by Lily of all sisters. Unless there's someone in the shadows they've failed to notice (again). Also, two pages in one weekend? I'm pretty new here, but that seems unusual. Was it someone's birthday?
Muze Clark
2025-02-17 05:46:35 +0000 UTCOh por dios 😱😱 hasta Lily los vio y en qué momento
Juan Carlos Juarez
2025-02-17 05:46:31 +0000 UTCOMG i jjust woke up an you drop this!
Fabinator
2025-02-17 05:46:21 +0000 UTCThey're taking the smart route. I always knew they were going to do this. It's the only way for them to truly be happy together. At least they have a chance to say goodbye to their baby sister in person.
CipherRage0909
2025-02-17 05:46:15 +0000 UTCHoly shit they're going to do it! And dang it Lily is right there. I hope at the take her to bed
C.E. Zim93
2025-02-17 05:44:00 +0000 UTCThey Are About To Leave & Lily Know Lynn & Lincoln Loud Are Going To Run Away But Can They Take Her With Them Or Tell Her To Don’t Tell The Loud Family Or Come Leave With Them.
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-02-17 05:43:39 +0000 UTCMisery if you do, Misery if you don’t!
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-02-17 05:43:18 +0000 UTCI kind of saw this coming. Really not much other choice
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-02-17 05:42:37 +0000 UTCOh shit. Poor Lily she isn't going to understand.
Corey Peters
2025-02-17 05:41:37 +0000 UTCLily: Aún quieren traumarme más y dudar de mis emociones hijos de su pishi madre
alex sonic
2025-02-17 05:41:36 +0000 UTCQUE HACÍA AHÍ AJSKSKDKSKDKS
MatiasDonGato
2025-02-17 05:40:56 +0000 UTC
