Rewrite the Stars V || Page 57
Added 2025-03-17 05:22:54 +0000 UTC
It's like poetry; it rhymes.
When did the relationship jump from kissing to being nude n bed together?
Yhnbj
2025-07-12 02:41:56 +0000 UTC
I get the feeling that Angus knows what's going on. They do things a little differently over in Loch Loud.
TheLoreMaker
2025-05-20 03:38:37 +0000 UTC
Yep cousin marriage that they were allowed in medieval kinda freaky thing. 🫠
Mark John Banzon
2025-04-20 22:48:11 +0000 UTC
La familia Loudgaryen.
Roberto Espínola
2025-04-07 04:30:30 +0000 UTC
Thats some craaaazy 1600's Loud family lore
Owen Landr
2025-04-05 22:00:10 +0000 UTC
Yeah, I don't think Lincoln and Lynn Jr are going to stay in Scotland for very long, and they better hope Morag won't betray them by telling their parents that they are currently in the castle. Lincoln can become the duke once more and ban his own family from going to Scotland, but that could be a bad idea.
Blazzore
2025-03-18 14:48:25 +0000 UTC
Reqdy
TendingHealer13
2025-03-18 12:02:41 +0000 UTC
Right
TendingHealer13
2025-03-18 11:26:11 +0000 UTC
Here's my username: avi6187
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-18 04:49:44 +0000 UTC
Aww, I do love just the little moments of Lynn trying to cheer Lincoln up. That's adorable. Just a pause for some small tender moments, after all the drama an craziness.
Kevin
2025-03-18 02:32:31 +0000 UTC
Username
TendingHealer13
2025-03-18 00:47:45 +0000 UTC
Hi! I'm good! How are you? But I've got discord, of course! I don't remember how to add someone on Discord, as most of the people I talk to there are already my friends. Should I give you my username, or my display name?
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-18 00:03:46 +0000 UTC
Do you have discord?
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 20:15:23 +0000 UTC
FACTS !!!!!!!!
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 20:02:03 +0000 UTC
Pass please
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 20:01:29 +0000 UTC
He has?
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 20:01:12 +0000 UTC
Hey...how are you?
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:59:44 +0000 UTC
Hero you could do alot if you did have discord server 😁 mostly a win win for us and you
Julio vargas
2025-03-17 19:59:42 +0000 UTC
Me too bro
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:56:38 +0000 UTC
Two more!!!!
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:56:29 +0000 UTC
I ment I loved this chapter
BRICE MORRIS
2025-03-17 19:36:55 +0000 UTC
I knew this was going to happen and I love how many more page's are left before its the end of this chapter and the beginning of then next chapter
BRICE MORRIS
2025-03-17 19:32:46 +0000 UTC
Reafy
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:22:16 +0000 UTC
Forget...i have
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:20:57 +0000 UTC
I dont have discord...lol
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 19:20:42 +0000 UTC
I'm on Discord. Sorry, I was a bit busy. I'll edit this comment to remove my profile name later.
@ [EXPIRED]
Don't be afraid, I am kind
2025-03-17 19:17:23 +0000 UTC
Nice history tip
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 18:59:44 +0000 UTC
Wow
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 18:59:33 +0000 UTC
The queen married her cousin i think the Scott's would be okay with you two Lincoln they know how royalty works.
Jose Hernandez
2025-03-17 18:44:44 +0000 UTC
Where are you from?
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 18:08:26 +0000 UTC
Yk you are a good person
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 18:08:13 +0000 UTC
Thanks bro
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 18:08:01 +0000 UTC
It would be neat for me too. But I am generally not active at social media. I am sorry for that. Still if you want to chat and talk sometimes, why not.
Don't be afraid, I am kind
2025-03-17 18:01:46 +0000 UTC
Hero, fix the Dm
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:59:59 +0000 UTC
Idk how to talk lol
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:58:37 +0000 UTC
Im kidding, but id ypu want to tañk, im always free
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:58:12 +0000 UTC
Pleqse, you are kind, andi need friends lol
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:57:54 +0000 UTC
I dunno but I am pretty sure there were Direct Message system in Patreon. Maybe in app? Maybe UnderratedHero must do that in their settings. But I don't know.
Don't be afraid, I am kind
2025-03-17 17:56:18 +0000 UTC
Bro? 🤨
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:51:48 +0000 UTC
🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:51:40 +0000 UTC
But seriouslly...whats a dm and how you dm???
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:51:04 +0000 UTC
Haahah
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:50:43 +0000 UTC
How to fill your DMs with art requests.
Bet you did something like "RTS V || Page 56.5" somewhere. That would be funny.
At least they finally slept. And I guess this is not their first sleep like... "That". :-I
Would be cool to see what their ancestors also lived back then.
Also, this is probably the page with the most comments among this comic's pages. I wonder why XD
Good job mate. Keep going.
Don't be afraid, I am kind
2025-03-17 17:37:02 +0000 UTC
Yeah
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 17:34:07 +0000 UTC
You're welcome
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 17:31:38 +0000 UTC
We'll find soon enough!
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 17:31:27 +0000 UTC
Oh boy, what's the next chapter going to be called?
David Mullins
2025-03-17 17:21:26 +0000 UTC
I wonder what's there next move will be like?
Thuren Miller
2025-03-17 17:11:42 +0000 UTC
I also got to thinking, that they might not of done the deed. They both are so physically, mentally, and emotionally wiped that love making might have been the last thing on their minds. Their clothes probably reeked, with the staff washing all of them. So Linc and Lynn probably both took a shower, dried off, gotten into bed and cuddled, enjoying the very small moment of peace. They probably fell asleep talking over plans, especially taking Lynn's well-rounded plans into consideration.
Ashley Randall
2025-03-17 16:27:31 +0000 UTC
What about baraag? Or pixiv? They both would allow it, probably. Have you seen some of the stuff baraag puts out. Wow! And they are both over 18, right? (Nudge Nudge, wink wink. Know what I mean, know what I mean?) 😈😇
Ashley Randall
2025-03-17 16:17:45 +0000 UTC
Haha
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 16:12:08 +0000 UTC
Everytime hero does this of teasing Lincoln and Lynn having good moments it’s like that icarly episode of the panda hitting Kenan Thompson with a tennis racket hero like the panda hits us with a racket with pages likes this 🤣
Julio vargas
2025-03-17 16:04:41 +0000 UTC
Yep we know totally sucks maybe other platforms like Bluesky lol this what happens when you tease it hero! People want more 🤣
Julio vargas
2025-03-17 15:57:35 +0000 UTC
Me neither😭😭😭😭😭
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 15:52:27 +0000 UTC
Sus 🤨
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 15:47:30 +0000 UTC
Lots of people asking for it, too bad Patreon wouldn't allow it.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:46:30 +0000 UTC
Oh yes of course, I can understand that. I just can't believe it's ending soon.
Happychap2628
2025-03-17 15:45:45 +0000 UTC
Haha
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 15:45:27 +0000 UTC
At least two more
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:45:13 +0000 UTC
Oh nierda
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 15:45:11 +0000 UTC
I'm still figuring it out
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:44:59 +0000 UTC
No va a quedar embarazada por accidente, son cuidadosos. Y pues las hermana sus sabían que tenían relaciones porque escucharon cuando Rita y Lynn Sr se lo preguntaron.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:44:21 +0000 UTC
He knows them and he knows they're good kids. He doesn't judge people. He even forgave Morag!
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:43:39 +0000 UTC
Yeah
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:42:20 +0000 UTC
Exactly, she only wants Lincoln the way he is. Doesn't need anything else
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:42:12 +0000 UTC
There are more chapters in this story! And thank you so much for the kind praise.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:41:13 +0000 UTC
I think a simple comic is the best we can expect 😅 but thank you!
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:40:18 +0000 UTC
So did they you know did it 😆 there should be like a mini comic of them doing it between pages lol you know hidden parts of the story like the first time they did it til now 😆
Julio vargas
2025-03-17 15:36:56 +0000 UTC
Yeah, that's what the quote means
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:36:41 +0000 UTC
The intended ready of reading lol
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:36:05 +0000 UTC
For the moment, Lucy's staying in Royal Woods with everyone else.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:35:50 +0000 UTC
They're doing all this to be together, after being separated for so long they needed to feel connected once again
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 15:33:52 +0000 UTC
<3
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 14:53:05 +0000 UTC
Wow
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 14:53:01 +0000 UTC
I think...two more
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 14:52:56 +0000 UTC
I found online there names are lyall and lachlan
Darcy lee
2025-03-17 14:49:17 +0000 UTC
I should have posted a chapter sooner. I had a dream a couple nights ago where they finally make it to Scotland and looking through their ancestral book they find love letters of the two ancestors that look exactly like them. Through their Discovery it turns out they had a bastard Twins and one of them was their direct ancestor of the loud family we know today word get back to there parents after discovering this dark family secret start to have a different point of view.
Darcy lee
2025-03-17 14:47:12 +0000 UTC
( Speaking Through The Straw In The Sand ) Hey, Underrated Hero, I almost forgot to ask you something...
What's after Separation?
Is there going to be another chapter of the story?
David Mullins
2025-03-17 14:10:18 +0000 UTC
I hope at least one of them
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 12:38:42 +0000 UTC
Facts
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 12:32:10 +0000 UTC
Hehehe
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 12:32:02 +0000 UTC
Yep
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 12:31:53 +0000 UTC
So any thoughts on the next chapters title
“Resolutions”
“Reunions”
“Reflections”
?
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-03-17 12:30:53 +0000 UTC
Siento que las palabras finales de lincoln, cobraran importancia
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:23:39 +0000 UTC
*insertar mirada de las mil yardas*
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:19:35 +0000 UTC
😏😏😏
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:16:19 +0000 UTC
Bueno...la verdas...como las hermanas se enterqran que tienen...sexo y...que pasa si lynn queda embarazada
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:15:49 +0000 UTC
Yep
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:13:59 +0000 UTC
😏
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:13:53 +0000 UTC
For a npc like me...its nice
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:13:34 +0000 UTC
Yeahhhh
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:13:15 +0000 UTC
Facts
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:12:38 +0000 UTC
I saw it
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:12:27 +0000 UTC
<3
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:12:15 +0000 UTC
Wqit...in other page?
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:11:33 +0000 UTC
Rico...mentiras
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:11:16 +0000 UTC
🤨😏
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:11:04 +0000 UTC
Pray
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:10:52 +0000 UTC
Jajaja
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:10:47 +0000 UTC
🙂
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:10:38 +0000 UTC
Goodbye my innocenece
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:10:22 +0000 UTC
Laugh
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:10:00 +0000 UTC
Ma guy not sleep
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:09:48 +0000 UTC
Maybe
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:09:35 +0000 UTC
Yes
TendingHealer13
2025-03-17 11:09:18 +0000 UTC
I always go back to search for your coment they always give me a smile
Fabinator
2025-03-17 10:45:13 +0000 UTC
He seems to be well aware of their hidden relationship nor doesn't seem to bother him
Aboubakar Bagayoko
2025-03-17 09:30:46 +0000 UTC
So, two more pages left?
Paul Hoon
2025-03-17 09:13:14 +0000 UTC
He knows and he’s cool with it. But Lincoln’s right. He can’t be Duke because the town knows them.
However, Lynn doesn’t want a Duke, she wants him. It’ll take time to heal and start over.
Also, I love how it’s after they made love.
Paul Hoon
2025-03-17 09:10:07 +0000 UTC
It just keeps getting better and better! The plot. The artwork. The story line. It all continues to rise, even though we are coming to the end of this chapter. (Just chapter, right? The last paneled page will have a to be continued on it, right? Please.) And the characters have become so well-rounded, especally Lynn. It's just fantastic!
Ashley Randall
2025-03-17 08:37:23 +0000 UTC
This is an amazing story. Is there an award for best comic of 2025? Because if there is, I need to know so that I can nominate this chapter! It's a shame copyright law prevents you from making a movie adaptation. I'd pay lots of money to see it in the movie theater! Not working on an AU movie with you is a missed opportunity for Nick. There is the potential for everyone to make lots of money, and the cartoon world would never be the same again. I know I commented way too much, lol. But I'm extremely impressed by your work. Hopefully someday, they'll weaken copyright law, so that such a movie can be made! I'll keep dreaming, I guess.
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-17 08:10:20 +0000 UTC
Oooooooooooooohhhhhh...
Okay, that makes a lot of sense.
Well then...
( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out Again )
( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )
David Mullins
2025-03-17 07:38:24 +0000 UTC
And when he says "history doesn't repeat, it rhymes", he's referring to Lincoln and Lynn's ancestors, right? I guess it runs in the family, so to speak.
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-17 07:33:56 +0000 UTC
I just realized the twist. Angus knows! And it seems like he supports them. Makes me have hope for a happy future for the two!
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-17 07:28:16 +0000 UTC
I could see Lucy resenting their family for rejecting Lincoln and Lynn’s love despite her warnings, which led to the family falling apart. She might even figure out where they went, tell Angus she misses them, and leave Royal Woods with Haiku (I ship them) and Lily to reunite with Lincoln and Lynn, so that they could heal as a family. A somewhat happy ending, what do you think?
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-17 07:23:01 +0000 UTC
I kinda wanna see their ancestors ghost appear through the window hold eachother and supporting them from the background
Lilblackviper
2025-03-17 07:15:02 +0000 UTC
I just want to say that the first two panels are even more hilarious when you actually read this and the previous page in sequence.
Muze Clark
2025-03-17 07:13:58 +0000 UTC
Hi UnderratedHero! I'm glad I subscribed, as the anticipation was killing me! But I have a question. Will there be a reunion chapter with Lucy and Lily?
TheSchwifyOne
2025-03-17 07:01:19 +0000 UTC
Oh dame, I bet they really needed to relieve some stress.
Happychap2628
2025-03-17 06:54:19 +0000 UTC
OK No Pregnant For Lynn & Lincoln May Tell Angus The Truth. Or Not Tell Him The Truth.
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-03-17 06:35:17 +0000 UTC
Las dos
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:32:00 +0000 UTC
Hmmm
That makes sense
SreznoJIG07
2025-03-17 06:31:58 +0000 UTC
She's not getting pregnant in this page
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:31:53 +0000 UTC
There were some precedents, yeah. And Angus figured it out.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:31:20 +0000 UTC
Indeed, as painful as it is, their past is behind them, and they can finally start looking into their future together.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:30:26 +0000 UTC
Always nice to throw a curve ball.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:29:25 +0000 UTC
I don't know, maybe one day I'll write a comic for them lol
Suffice to say, they were indeed in love back then.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 06:29:11 +0000 UTC
Angus definitely knows Lincoln and Lynn's relationship. "History does repeat itself." and I totally called it that their ancestors were also in an incest relationship! XD But I'm just wondering how it went with those two. I mean, incest relationships weren't really that serious back in that era, but it was still taboo to some.
CipherRage0909
2025-03-17 06:18:56 +0000 UTC
Holy shit, didn't see this twist coming.
Boeing707
2025-03-17 06:12:18 +0000 UTC
They already did. I can't imagine the amount of sex they had before they ran away.
CipherRage0909
2025-03-17 06:11:10 +0000 UTC
Aha! I thought as much – it was part of their lineage! The Duke had the same forbidden feelings for his sporty older sister, as well. Not gonna lie— I did suspect how later that night, Lincoln and Lynn would consummate the same way their ancestors did. And in that same bed, too, I betcha anything! Oh, it’s just so wonderful.
Yes, Lincoln and Lynn’s stay in Loch Loud will be temporary; yes, the whole town knows they’re related; yes, they’ve lost so much this week. But there will be so much more for Lincoln and Lynn to gain in the future. And they will definitely have to continue fighting for it. But at least for now, Lincoln and Lynn can make up for lost time as they begin to heal.
I.O. Penner
2025-03-17 06:04:40 +0000 UTC
( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand )
( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic again... and on a Monday too...
( 1 Minute Later )
Huh, teensy question, Underrated Hero...
Well, actually it's more like a question meets the answer and a query meets a statement...
You know, when I read the first panel of the page, I've seemed to have noticed that Angus has one those knowing faces on him...
And what about the way The Duke and Lynn Jr's ancestor were stirring at each other in the paintings behind Lynncoln?...
It was almost like they too have fallen in love with each other as well...
Underrated Hero, if I didn't know or read this page any better, I'd almost have to say that...
( My Cousin Interrupting Me )
They're vegetarians?!...
Nope, nope... That's not what I was going to say...
Anyway, Underrated Hero, it's almost a bit like the relationship between Lincoln and Lynn Jr...
Runs in the family...
( Realizing Again )
Oooooooooooooohhhhhh...
David Mullins
2025-03-17 05:53:35 +0000 UTC
The more you know.
Cause Knowledge is Power!
And Knowing is Half the Battle.
Muze Clark
2025-03-17 05:53:15 +0000 UTC
What If They Not Using Protection Lynn Gets Pregnant She Blames Herself & She May Become A Mother Also Lincoln May Blames Himself Too & Become A Father Please Don’t Let This Happen No Spoilers Don’t Ruin This Story Please! Wait Until They Are 30 To 32 Years Old For Lynn & Lincoln!🙏
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-03-17 05:51:27 +0000 UTC
Keyword " probably".😇
C.E. Zim93
2025-03-17 05:49:15 +0000 UTC
*sighs* yeah, I should've figured
*grumbles* I still want them to get some peace soon.
Muze Clark
2025-03-17 05:49:06 +0000 UTC
Yo automáticamente al ver la nueva pág : Rico 😏 o triste 😢
José Ángel Romero Rosales
2025-03-17 05:48:44 +0000 UTC
Angus knows a lot. I'm impressed. Wasn't sure if he knew but now we know. "G. I. Joe!!!"😎👍🏿
C.E. Zim93
2025-03-17 05:48:30 +0000 UTC
Next? Cuddle and sleeping. I think you should be asking what they were doing before.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:47:34 +0000 UTC
Yeah, really painful situation for them.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:46:49 +0000 UTC
He figured it out because he knows the secrets of Loch Loud and what the Duke was up to with one of his sisters.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:46:30 +0000 UTC
Hang on. Does Angus know that Lincoln and Lynn are in an incest relationship, and he doesn’t care? And is somewhat ‘supportive’??
Wow. That was something I didn’t see coming 😊
I wander what Lincoln and Lynn are going to do ‘next’… in the bed 😏
SreznoJIG07
2025-03-17 05:46:13 +0000 UTC
In the end, they just want to live a normal life together, and they won't be able to do it if everyone knows they're related.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:45:37 +0000 UTC
I'm on a roll!
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:44:29 +0000 UTC
They're using protection. Probably.
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:43:57 +0000 UTC
What? That their ancestors wanted to keep the bloodline pure?
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:43:34 +0000 UTC
( Facepalm ) Oh, brother.
David Mullins
2025-03-17 05:43:29 +0000 UTC
Hacía mucho tiempo que no escuchaba esa canción
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:42:53 +0000 UTC
We can only hope!
UnderratedHero
2025-03-17 05:42:12 +0000 UTC
I hope everything goes well between them and their journey
Justin Sigler
2025-03-17 05:40:40 +0000 UTC
Hoy es noche de sexo voy a devorar te de lo lindo hoy es noche se sexo y cumpliré tus fantasías hoy es noche de sexo
alex sonic
2025-03-17 05:40:14 +0000 UTC
Couldn't stop laughing I should have saw this coming 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Chimadakid2006
2025-03-17 05:38:30 +0000 UTC
That Night They Are Naked In Bed?! What If Lincoln Got Lynn Pregnant & Having Sex Like NSFW What A Oh My God 😳😱Moment I Wish I See They Private Parts With My Own 👀 Eyes
Silvester Rodriguez
2025-03-17 05:28:05 +0000 UTC
Excuse me while I go die of laughter.
🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂
How long was that? Did they even make it two minutes before he realized? Oh, please, Angus, please speak up to these young ones, please 🙏 😆
Edit: *reads the rest of the page* 😳 I was not ready for that. It wasn't much, but it was still more than I expected.
And on a much more serious note, Angus, please talk to them and impress upon them how much you and perhaps the town would be on their side, please 🙏.
Muze Clark
2025-03-17 05:26:23 +0000 UTC
Another page so soon ????!!!
Fabinator
2025-03-17 05:26:21 +0000 UTC
Wait a minute... Did Angus knew about their relationship? Looks that way. And those 2 look like they're going to get "busy"!
C.E. Zim93
2025-03-17 05:25:43 +0000 UTC
Also yeah sucks losing so much in a short timeframe it’s feels like your world was made of glass but you had to take a hammer to it
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-03-17 05:25:10 +0000 UTC
Hmmm ecchi
Jachob(braineyac)
2025-03-17 05:24:16 +0000 UTC