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Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)











「ブルータルガーデン」の日本語と英語版を用意しています。

I am working on the English and Japanese versions of .


英語版からの翻訳が先に完了したのでこちらを先に作業中ですが日本語版もすぐ完了しそうです。

The English version has been completed first, so we are working on this first, but the Japanese version will also be completed soon.

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英語なのでよくわかりませんが、すごく面白そうな雰囲気が伝わってきます!

bg

潾 - I disagree because that insinuates she's participating in the training instead of being an outside observer.

Random

That works too :)

Random

I think it'll be easier to say: You call this training?!

Would it feel okay to write "Do you call that training?"

Beast Anime

Page 6... "You call it a training?" Feels like it should read "You call that training?"

Random

Thanks for the suggestion! If you see any other strange parts, please feel free to let us know.

Beast Anime

Looks amazing! Can't wait to see the rest. For the 2nd pic, shouldn't it be: "Because it is a very dangerous place" instead of "Because it is a various dangerous place" Not sure what the original line was suppose to be, so its just a suggestion

Looks interesting <3

Nastassya

Excellent.

YES!!!

Random

Nice I’m looking forward to this, thank you for your hard work ^_^

Xilas


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