Material Gods, Chapter 14
Added 2025-11-15 14:29:15 +0000 UTCComments
"Two heartbeats" had me confused for a moment. I thought maybe she pregnant for a bit. I was wrong apparently. Maybe reword it to something like, "Her heart thumped twice" or something to avoid confusion. Just an idea.
X Blade
2025-11-16 15:18:54 +0000 UTCNice
Joel Perez
2025-11-16 00:27:50 +0000 UTCContessa is deeply confused and gravely concerned. The Path is wrong almost immediately.
Sgt. Rock
2025-11-15 16:58:39 +0000 UTC
