MC meets Anna. 2.0
Added 2022-12-03 04:32:07 +0000 UTCHow about a peek into the conversation between MC and Anna when they first meet?
I would like to thank Michael Hawk and Corona for their time and attention in writing the feedback. I just made the changes. Hope you guys like it.
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MC - I never thought it would be so difficult to find another room in this city. I can't imagine living in that place. I think I better go back to the dorm and beg Deb to let me stay there.
That's my bus!
While running to catch the bus MC comes across a beautiful woman on the street.
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MC hits his head on a pole and falls.
Anna - Hey, are you okay?
When he opened his eyes he got startled to see a blue face very close to his.
MC - Ouch , I think the beat was strong this time. I'm seeing everything blue.
Anna- Blue? Oh, you mean my makeup? You can rest assured, this work of art was made by me. At least that's not a symptom of the knock you just took.
How many fingers can you see?
Mc- Two?
Anna- Sure thing.
Wait, did you say "this time"? Is this the second time you get your head hit today?
MC- It wasn't my fault but... yeah.
Anna- Lucky one.
Come here, I'll give you a hand.
Would you like some water? I was saving this water for myself, but I think you'll put it to good use.
MC- Thanks for the help Miss… viking?
Anna- VIKING, you too!? I am an elf warrior! Why can't anyone see the EARS? Look!
MC- Of cooourse elf warrior. I don't know why I said that.
This explains the face painting, but what about the axe?
Anna- The spears were sold out...
MC- I hate when that happens.
Anna- ha ha ha, If you keep mocking me I'll break you in two, human.
MC - Easy, easy... elf warrior. I take it that's not your real name, am I right?
Anna- Would be cool but no. My name is Anna, and yours?
MC- MC.
Just tell me one thing. What is the reason for the costume? I saw another person just a little while ago dressed as a power ranger. Isn't it too early for halloween?
Anna- This is not a costume, it's a cosplay. And this is not for halloween, you funny boy.
There's a game convention going on nearby, which is where I'm going.
What about you? What brings you here today? Came just to kiss poles? Haha
MC- Look who's the funny one now.
Anna- You started it!
MC- Guilty. Sooo, I'm looking for a room to rent, But I still couldn't find one. Apparently the only places with a vacancy cost an arm and a leg.
Anna- A room… Wait!
There's a room for rent in my building, it became vacant this week, maybe it's still available.
MC- Really? I would like to check it out. Could you give me the address?
Anna- This is the place... Now I think it's better to run because I heard that someone else is interested.
MC- Thank you! I will go there now.
Anna- Good luck human and be careful.. There are many poles in this city. (laughs)
MC- ha ha ha…
Anna- Bye!
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