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Dwindling in the Dark (Full sketch Comic)

Tho I'm sick as hell, I came into work today, and in my free time I scribbled the rest of this dark tale. It's another Alternate Universe btw. Please let me know what you think!








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And that's that! In this universe, Marissa is squashed to death once and for all by Cynthia! No revives here 😬☠️ Hope you enjoyed!


Somewhat Gory scrapped panel after the jump
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Dwindling in the Dark (Full sketch Comic)

Comments

Ooh! Yes! Always love Cynthia crushing her pathetic daughter underfoot! I like Marissa being big..but Cynthia will always be my #1

I feel like that story could go several different ways. Mar takes care of her and cares for her, maybe ultimatly decides to squish her to get her back to normal. Mar takes care of her but then some kind of accident happens, like she steps on her by mistake or one of her friends finds her and doesnt know its her mother while mar is taking care of her. Cynthia finds another shrunken person at that size and they get on pretty well and its some weird family dynamic with big daughter and little parent (and step parent). Alt universe Mar toys with her while she goes through some rebellious phase and points out all the things that that universe cynthia did wrong and then ends her. Small Cynthia gets heckin kidnapped by Lizandra of all people and its apart of her plan to lure Marissa and Sanj (actually this one gives me an idea for a story... with an interesting ending) SO MANY AVENUES!

Swirly Time

Hnnnnn This turned out great and good short story too! I feel bad for this alt universe version of marissa though. Makes me wonder about the other alt universe versions or how cynthia in this universe even found out about marissas want to be squished.

Swirly Time

This already looks excellent, awesome job so far!

Oracle

Glad you liked it :D I have actually considered that, and with this whole alternate universe thing going on, I may give that sort of story a shot one of these days 😁

Guireyart

Glad you liked it! There is something less restrictive about doing sketchy work like this, and since people seem to have responded really well to it, I may do more in the future! We'll have to wait and see 😁

Guireyart

Turned out great. I really liked it. It might be interesting though to see one where Cynthia shrinks and Mari takes care of her. Seems Cynthia gets all fun but none of the punishment.

Marinka

love it! ^o^ especially the gory final panel. that was a treat. also, I really dig the sketchy quality of this. I love sketches besides, but certain moments, like tiny mari when she's caught, and cynthia's foot, look wonderful in a different way than your refined work. but that's just me. I love to see sketches.

binary_prophet

Also, that "Anya eats all her siblings and their friends" thing is just a typical Saturday night for Anya, isn't it? XD

CM Waters

-One where Dalvir is the only one with powers -One where the powers are growth (either self or others) -One where Mari and Cynthia have their views on tinies swapped -One where all the genders are swapped etc.

CM Waters

Glad you liked it! Yeah figured it'd be a nice dark story for the season lol

Guireyart

You can essentially imagine that for every ex she's crushed in the main timeline, there's a world where they somehow squashed her instead! Maybe a few where Sanjana is her rival and stomps her to death, one where Anya eats all of her siblings and their friends as cereal, the possibilities are endless!

Guireyart

Yeah, Alt Universe Marissa's don't seem to have good life expectancies 😅👣💥

Guireyart

Poor Alt Universe 2 Mari. Met the same fate but different person as Alt Universe 1 Mari.

CM Waters

Very cruel, but oh so good, haha! Good stuff man.

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