Dalvir & Marissa: Close Encounter concept
Added 2019-11-01 03:24:59 +0000 UTCI want to do a story where Dalvir becomes infatuated with Marissa, and ends up at her house for some reason maybe. Either that or she stays over at the Bakshi's (probably in the room that used to be his) and he ends up traversing around her as she either sleeps or relaxes!
Lemme know if you guys have any ideas too!
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Like the idea of her over at the Bakshis personally, not only because they might be able to show up as well, but as determined as the little guy is, it would probably be a heck of a jog over to her place. I like the idea, maybe Marissa realizes as cute as a tiny boyfriend is they aren't very useful ha. Either way like the sketch here, different sorta perspective.
Cool
2019-11-01 21:30:53 +0000 UTCOK! Managed to learn a whole new skill, but i salvaged it. Sorry if its kind of disjointed now. aaaand of course sorry for the length --------------------------- Superb idea! I think the idea of her being invited to the Bakshis is the best idea and then she just decides to sleep/ relax in his old room. OR possibly decides to do a bit of wandering around the house while the rest of them are out for some reason (had to go to the store/ pick another one up from the airport, etc), and then goes to his room because she never really has been in there. Decides to wander around in their a bit, stopping at moments. Its at this point Dalvir wanders in because its kind of his safe space while tiny, seeing as the others dont really go in there much. He notices marissa and has some kind of internal battle with himself (hes infatuated with her so he wants to get closer, but his developed instinct of bigger people is saying stay away). He decides to go over and get closer and closer, maybe close enough to touch. At some point she ether moves or mistakes him for a bug and raises her foot to squish him but then realizes its Dalvir. So she picks him up and they sit on his bed, she kind of takes a close look and questions him for a second and him simply being so close to her he just kind of blerts out his feelings (ether that or his feelings are "showing" >w>). She thinks hes kind of hot so she indulges him for a bit and allows him to explore her body seeing as no one else is home and if anything she can squish him and no one will know. At points in his exploration she maybe teases him and applies some pressure on him with her body (not enough to kill him), maybe even pokes his region a bit if/ when he gets near the hands (or she can do this when/ if he is picked up in her hand at any point), when he gets to the feet she could hold still while he does his thing or she could lower it down and wiggle it on him. She could also be quite impressed by some of his athletic feats around her body (climbing her foot rather fast and efficiently, being able to stay stable and balanced while she moves around, maybe jumping from one boob to the other ether out of a dare from her or just for fun, being able to hang on if she decides to blow on him jokingly, or maybe his strength (if she decides to apply pressure on him with her body, like bringing a finger or toe down on him lightly and him being able to produce a fair amount of feeling or resistance for his size)/ endurance (him being able to maybe traverse her body and not be tired at all.... or the other kind of endurance, as in he also manages to not "explode" on her but maintain until a point near the end of their fun where maybe she provides the final bit of stimulation. OR she could have made a rule at the beginning about not climaxing all over her, so he holds out until she allows him to do so.) Another Idea is her kind of playing into him likeing her and telling him to worship her body or something. Which surprises her because he is actually able to turn her on and be better than most other tiny people who fail to satisfy her in this way (could result in other things transpiring). Alternatively she could just take a nap in his room and he could use his tiny ninja skills to get up there and explore around, getting his jollies from being able to be so close and explore her form. Then she wakes up and traps him between her feet, thinking he is just some random tiny, but then notices its dalvir (the scene in the one picture you made with them both), and thinks hes cute so she lets him explore a bit more but on a time limit or her doing a game of sorts. In the end I say it could turn out wholesome, and she could give him a little smooch out of sympathy and slight attraction (not diminishing her other relationships) and tell him to run along and that she doesnt often let tinys go. But does warn him that if she happens to see him when the others are around she still might squish him, but if they dont see him then she might just give a little wink. Another possible ending is one of the other family members coming in while the business is going on between them, they notice dalvir and somehow deduce he has a crush on her. The family member being cruel, shrinks marissa and teases and threatens to crush marissa in front of dalvir just to see him suffer (maybe he doesnt know she can revive yet?). Dalvir asks if they will spare her and take him instead. Family member complies, and is sadistically satisfied and squishes dalvir. Cue marissa being moved by his feelings even at that size and calling the bigger family member a jerk before some dumb joke ("oh marissa almost forgot about you. You know i too have a crush!") then squishing her. Marissa can be peeved at whoever it is and get revenge at a later date.
Swirly Time
2019-11-01 19:52:54 +0000 UTCwell heck... im sorry... what i wrote is now all gone because i thought it went through and clicked off the page... Damn it all...
Swirly Time
2019-11-01 18:14:37 +0000 UTCI'm not seeing it....
Guireyart
2019-11-01 18:09:12 +0000 UTCp-please tell me that wall of text i just wrote got through.... dont do this to me patreon...
Swirly Time
2019-11-01 18:08:42 +0000 UTCI also have some ideas for the alternative scenario of him winding up at her place somehow, but i dont want to put another big block in your comment section. One way or another this is a fantastic chance to draw some close ups of marissas body and explore it yourself!
Swirly Time
2019-11-01 17:49:09 +0000 UTCI like the 2nd approach. Maybe he invited her over for the weekend and as soon as she got from work she wanted to rest in his bedroom, then Dalvir sees an opportunity to have some fun and shrinks to begin a little giant adventure around Marissa's body. I would even add that at the end he is tossed and mistaken by a bug and gets crushed, and then a frame where he is revived and un-shrunk (out of screen) and he is sitting on the floor ashamed while Marissa (legs and arms crossed) is angry at him and telling him off like "what a stupid thin you did, what if I never would've found out you weren't an insect" or something haha
gtsfan07
2019-11-01 05:37:18 +0000 UTCI think it is a good idea, you could even have a situation where the sisters catch him and shrink marissa and and crush him in front of her while shes small and then her after. Might be cool or have it so they try and Marissa shrinks them and crushes them individually while dalvir watches making comments about each one to taunt them.
Marinka
2019-11-01 03:27:39 +0000 UTC
