Dalvir's Divergence - Episode IV: Hands (Feet) of Fate

Quality story Quality writing Quality emotions This ones got me good, you captured even the feelings in the room perfect.

Swirly Time

It's been fun to come up with! A lot of the times I only know what's gonna happen next as I'm drawing, some stuff just comes to me in the moment, so it's unfolding for me too XD

Guireyart

I would love to do a full serialization honestly...I freaking love doing stories, though working on them can be a challenge for sure lol This is the closest I've gotten to a regularly updating ongoing comic story for Toetally, and I'll probs do more like it in the future tho!

Guireyart

Yeah when I saw your previous comment I was like lemme just stay quiet 🤣

Guireyart

WOOOOOOOOOOOT What I was hoping for so far is happening

Marinka

Good stuff. I am glad that this worked out in the end. At least for now, but we'll have to see what you have in store! I'd love to see more like this in the future. I'd honestly love to read a full blown serialization of your world you built but know how much work that takes. So keep on keeping on! c:

Woah Suri here with the clutch save! This has been a fun story arc to see unfold.

Sheograth

Appropriate that this was episode 4 in this case because now Dalvir has A New Hope.

CM Waters

The only woman I ever favored over Sanj (the siblings only) is Surinder

LBM

Good hearted is maybe a stretch XD but relative to her siblings I could definitely see it lol

Guireyart

Yeah I actually had that last shot of her drawn like back when I made chapter 2 lol, I just wasn't entirely sure how I wanted her to figure in yet. And I did also consider a bad end, but I figured that'd limit things I could do in the future, so I avoided it haha. Things will be changed by this event still, but that would've been extra drastic

Guireyart

This is so good. I hope Suri plays with them before crushing all. Perhaps inshoe or vore, either way I am intrigued how Dalvir will get out of this one

gtsfan07

That is unexpected Surinder of all people to be the good hearted one

nicolas

An interesting turn of events. I thought Suri's absence was noticeable from the start ha. Part of me likes that Dalvir's got some big guns in his corner now, but the other part wouldn't mind a "bad end" at all personally. :p

Cool

Somewhat at least XD more will be revealed next time ;D

Guireyart

This is the exact twist I wanted

AllTheSizePuns

Without spoiling too much, I can confirm this is not a dream! I toyed around with the idea initially, but I've decided I am fully going to commit to this one! All events here are fully canon

Guireyart

This is all canon right? Please don't pull "It was all a dream" twist, my boy Dav needs a win for once.

Unaware Sage

Hol up... One of the Bakshis actually has a conscience? 🤯

SmolCrowBro