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Chaos Chapter 21: Chaos and You

A Chaotic Traveller's Journey

Chapter 21: Chaos and You

Deckreader:

https://www.deckreader.com/chapters/chaos21_bap5872

Google Doc:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u2UvAuYuzfVwrqPrMY335IeRb6EqBBMogTc2-XjziCA/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

The google doc is for chap 22 on here

Abyss458

Choccy Milk to start & Lucy's flustered face at the end were great.

RJKY

If his nickname ends up being Fey i feel that may lead to him getting abilities related to those devious creatures... also good job work with Lucy's panic!

the random assasin ???

I like how u conveyed Lucy's need to gtfo.

Jacob Faircloth

Nothing much to say other than good chapter. They have been let in on the secret, got some chockie milk, Lucy has been bagged and eventually they’ll be able to crossover. Realistically I image the Inventory as a hub will be opened with a few completed worlds, maybe 3-5. What I’m hoping is that Grim goes above and beyond his first quest and brings down and destroys all the damn corps on the planet that the patron is just “Damn, I respect the grind” and let’s Grim take his girls immediately. And if it is on the horizon to leave then I say it’s time to start spending money on him and the girls. Get some of the best cyberware for them, an entire armory for him maybe some BioWare which shouldn’t I love cutting anything out of him as well as some add-on type of gear and cyberware, and make way to Dogtown Cynosure facility. It’s probably all that’s needed to empower Giffany once she gets a body too. I’ll refer back to an early comment on how Gif can beat the corps. Good stuff man and can’t wait for the next one!

Loghead101

Whenever I think of Lucy I remember the bathroom scene. Nah, she can't come with after that sacrilege.

ytm

I like this chapter, im glad he can maneuver through worlds with diffrent people, im interested to see if he gets a traveling ability of his own then he can set up a base of operations on a weaker scale world and not have to worry about his group

Rez

Lucy and Becca won their Own Lottery Prize with Grimm. Like 1 in 10 Billion chance to get off that Hellhole of a world and with a Guy who doesn’t treat them like An Onahole that talks? Miracles barely cuts it. Also Cute Lucy is Cute!

SaffireSpirit13


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