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Jobs/Exploration Phase A New Dawn

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Okay fine here's a TLDR

I want to change the job in both human town and orc town to reflect Victoria's egoism/altruism and the cities chaos/order. Mostly focused on the human town to hide some of the sex scenes until the city has turned more chaotic. I will not remove sex scenes or change the paths with the innkeeper, old man, the jerk and so on. But certain events will not be as frequent until Victoria has created chaos in the town. Why would she want to create order then? Well for now it will give easier events and let you progress the game quicker.

Here's the full detailed description.

A part of the game I'm not so satisfied with and have been for a long time is the exploration phase. This is the phase when Victoria is supposed to walk around in town and meet different NPC and be exposed to different scenes. At some point she should also find Sarah and start the quest to find her mother or start fighting back against the monsters that's invading the land.

What I'm especially dissatisfied with is the jobs. I've always liked these jobs. Some should get a few changes.

But these I'm not satisfied with.

I've been considering for a long time to change this, removing some of the jobs that's repetitive and doesn't really add anything to Victoria's mind or the game. I'm also considering adding a new scale altruism/egoism and order/chaos. The daily jobs will affect these variables. For example:

Helping the shop owner. Victoria will then have 3 different choices.

1. Let some of the poor people get away with buying bread cheaper. This will change the scale of altruism and egoism. Leaning more altruism. This will also create more chaos. Since she is breaking the law.

2. Take some of the bread for herself. This will lean more towards egoism but also create chaos. The shop owner might also catch Victoria stealing.

3. Make sure everyone pays what they should pay. This will be neutral to altruism/egoism and create order. Shop owner will be pleased and might let Victoria get a reward.

There will be events in the town that will change the scale as well, like refugees seeking shelter, thief trying to steal money etc. In an altruism path Victoria won't be able to betray her friends but with an egoism path she will. The chaos and order will affect the town and the events she can meet. With chaos the sex scenes will become more frequent. With order there will be very few sex scenes. Victoria will be forced to make a decision in every job that might change the scale.

I'm not planning on removing any of the sex scenes, neither for Victoria or anyone in the town. What I mean is, remove Jasmin in the sewer, the glory hole meeting, Blake might not show himself, Innkeeper might not steal the bunny dancer and Victoria will not be able to start dancing etc. What exactly the chaos will do is not fully decided.

Another change I want to do is changing how the day turns to night. Instead of changing to night automatically after doing 2 old jobs the day will turn to night when Victoria has chosen a place to stay. Wench, whoring, glory hole, brothel and dancing will only be available at night and if certain conditions are met like it always has been. This will allow the player to buy food, and do the quests before night automatically comes.

These changes are meant to make the daily exploration less repetitive. But also give more context to why the town is turning into chaos instead of having a full blasted chaos right from the start with sex everywhere. Maybe at full chaos there might be some bad ends available and possibly hu-cow content in the human city as well!

This could also lead to similar jobs in the orc city, instead of hu-cow and glory hole she will do daily tasks like polishing armour and weapon with other females. Carrying beverages to the tavern. Once again I'm not removing the hu-cow content or fuckroom. Just adding some flesh before it.

Since these changes will affect the game greatly I wanted to find out what you think about it. Does it sound good or not?

Do you have any questions or ideas feel free to leave a comment!

Cheers!

Comments

She will not have combat skills. I've not spent so much time thinking about revenge plots but it's not something I'm ruling out completely.

WhiteRaven

Just thinking about, when she get's abused...will the story have a revenge plot? Will she have combat skills of her own as well?

alexbramos .

No I was more thinking that Victoria comes back from orc city and maybe some bad man get twisted ideas or something along those lines. In a chaos city the boundaries get pushed and a hu-cow farm doesn't sound too far fetched.

WhiteRaven

So the humans in the human town start to use women as Hucows to breed an army and supply the tavern with milk once alcohol runs out or the city gets conquered? Anyways I like your idea

Rodriguez


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